All Comments on 'Louisiana Days Ch. 05'

Thanks for writing another chapter with Doris in it. I loved it! Hot stuff. The grammar and spelling were a little rough around the edges, but otherwise it was fantastic. Thanks again :)

I'm so impressed with your descriptions. You don't seem to miss one detail, down to her freckles.

Sorry it took so long to get to this, but I'm happy I finally got to read it. I enjoy your writing, but would even more if you'd attempt to proof.

You always add humor and this line made me chuckle: Doris... Doris... Doris... I claim you. I claim you." I had no idea what that meant...

Keep up the good work.