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Part 3 of "Faith, Hope, and Love." (Short 1,000 words)
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Part 3 of the 3 part series

Updated 04/05/2024
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This is not an erotic short story. Just be warned. If you're looking for my usual fare, please click My Stories

I had fun writing stories for the Literotica 750 Word Challenge, but my OCD wanted to do a nice round 1,000 words, so here we are. A three-part series each containing exactly 1,000 words.

This is Part 3.

I hope you enjoy reading them!

Love, Frey

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After putting the gun safe away, Finn walked to the local park where, a lifetime ago, he and Ana had spent so many wonderful afternoons and evenings. Their usual bench was unoccupied, so he sat down and just listened to the gurgling of the nearby stream for a while. Eventually, he picked up the book from his lap and looked at it. The last time he had opened it, his wife had been alive.

It took some concerted effort, but he was able to finish two chapters before he closed the book again. It hurt his heart to see couples walking along the stone pathway chatting and smiling, so he decided to head home.

As he reached the street, he noticed a woman walking a dog and thought about how Ana would insist on going over to say hello to every single dog she saw at the park. Much to Finn's chagrin -- he was not really a 'dog person.'

But since he was beginning his new life, and in honor of his wife, he walked over to meet the dog.

"Beautiful dog you have," he said as he approached.

"Thank you."

"May I pat him?"

"Of course," she replied. "He loves meeting new people."

Finn crouched down and started scratching the dog behind its ears. After a few moments, he noticed the woman looking at him kind of oddly.

"Finn?"

He stood up. "Yes?"

"Vera." She touched her chest and smiled at him. "From the bridge."

"Oh! Wow!"

"How have you been?" She asked.

"It's been tough, but I'm getting through it."

"Your wife...?"

"Yes." Something about the genuine concern on her face made him tell her about the letter from Ana, though not the circumstances of him finding it.

"I'm so glad that you're able to move on, Finn!" She took his hand just as she did that morning so long ago. "Ana sounds like an amazing woman."

Unable to speak, Finn nodded, then self-consciously let go of her hand. He cleared his throat, and asked, "So, have you saved any other lives since that morning on the bridge?"

"Just Gary's."

"Who's Gary?"

She crouched down to give the dog a hug and said, "This is Gary."

"His name is Gary?"

"Yes. I brought him home from the shelter and he had no name. He was just a stray. After a few days, it became apparent that he had the personality of a Gary."

Finn chuckled. "And what is the personality of a Gary?"

"Him," she answered, pointing to the dog.

"Are you always this interesting?"

"No." She smiled. "I'm much more interesting."

"I'll bet."

Finn and Vera chatted a little more, while Gary sniffed at nothing in particular until they noticed a group of people coming into the park.

"Tomorrow, they're doing a Theater in the Park show and this must be a dress rehearsal," Vera explained. "They are performing A Midsummer Night's Dream." Then she added, "Hey, we should go. Are you doing anything tomorrow?"

Finn shrugged, "No."

"Great! Meet me back here at 4:00 tomorrow. And, Finn?"

"Yes."

"It was great seeing you again."

"It was great seeing you again, Vera."

During intermission, the next evening, Finn bought them both ice creams.

"Thank you," Vera said. "And, Finn... I want to be clear that this isn't a date."

"No! Of course not!"

"It's just nice to have someone to be with." Vera then told Finn that she had recently suffered her second miscarriage and because of that, her husband had left her. "In fact, the walk I took on the day I first met you was just after my first miscarriage."

"I had no idea," Finn said.

"It didn't seem important right then. I thought that maybe you needed more help than I did." She smiled. "And you don't know it, but ironically, helping you helped me get through that challenging time in my life."

She looked at him. "And here you are to help me, again."

"Hey, you climbed up the bridge to me."

"And you walked up to me yesterday, so we're even."

"I guess we are."

After the play, they took a slow stroll through the park.

"Ana and I loved this park."

"Gary and I do, too. We've been coming here for years."

"I wonder if we ever saw you here," Finn mused. "I wonder if Ana ever met you and Gary. She loved meeting all of the dogs."

"We may have met before, Finn. Wouldn't that be a trip?"

"It sure would."

"You know, since my husband left, I've been getting tired of cooking for one. You should come over for dinner."

"I've been tired of microwaving my meals. But why don't we go out to eat?"

"Not a date."

Finn smiled. "Definitely not a date."

After several weeks of once-a-week dinners -- sometimes out, sometimes in -- they graduated to two nights a week with the occasional three nights thrown in. In addition to shared meals, Finn and Vera went to see movies and plays and sometimes just took walks together with Gary.

"You know," Vera commented one evening over dinner at an expensive restaurant -- Finn had gotten a promotion at work and wanted to celebrate -- "to an outsider, it may look like we're dating."

"I was thinking the same thing."

"So, it's official," she stated. "We're dating."

"I guess we are."

"Finn, would it be okay if I told you how I felt about you or is our first official date too soon?"

He thought about it for a minute, then shook his head. "I don't know."

After a long pause, she said, "Well, I think maybe you need to hear it. I know that I need to say it."

She took a deep breath. "I love you, Finn."

He blinked back tears as he looked at Vera and thought of his dearly departed Anastasia. He wondered if there was any room left in his heart. Finally, he decided that there was.

"I love you, too."

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Comentarista82Comentarista8229 days ago

Oh that's fine, because there are exceptions to everything. I simply addressed the unspecified time:

what you address are findings from surveys/studies from one relationship website; another is from a psychology website; the last is actually from a business website and those statistics stated what the normal was. I knew 2 couples that went five or six dates although I don't know how they fared afterward..if I'm not sure of some facts I go research them then I list them. It's like saying that if somebody wants to get good in an instrument, they have to spend about 10 years playing it; that's the average and this is been known for geez what 30 years? But I've seen some guys that because they practice so much, end up getting really good at 5 or 6 years, and are able to listen to a song and actually pick and follow the same notes on their guitars or bases because they've trained their ears, and they've discovered they actually have the talent to do it, and/ or they have the intuition they had never explored before. So yes you are right there are and can be exceptions to every rule.

FreyaGersemiFreyaGersemi29 days agoAuthor

@Comentarista82, to address your statement: "most couples are considered serious around 2 months of dating; some couples go exclusive in as little as five to six dates, but are generally considered serious at 10." In real life, my S.O. and I were serious after our first date and exclusive without even discussing it (so, first, second, third date...?). In fact, after our first date, they announced to their family that I was "the one." So... There are ALWAYS exceptions to the rule. Especially when dealing with the people and their thoughts and emotions. As the kids say, "just sayin'!" 😊 If you can poke holes in other peoples' writing, I can poke holes in yours. 😁

AnonymousAnonymous30 days ago

Liked the story as it’s like books I read

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 1 month ago

I admit to this story completely charmed me with its ending, as it's one of those things that falls under you can suspend some belief because it's fiction, and can still happen. I don't have to know what your thought process was to put them together, but you framed how they met in the park perfectly with short explanations that settled the issue immediately. She handles him gently, and he subconsciously responds positively - - although he doesn't consciously think about it - - but even that interchange is very cute. To get them together is certainly then a plausible and pleasant way to end this account. Additionally, the kind of bigger reveal is Vera stumbled across him after her second miscarriage and she did not let on she suffered it because he was a stranger. Her displaying compassion in spite of her predicament shapes this piece as even more endearing. Just goes to show that it's exceptionally ignorant and incredibly immature to assume everyone isn't going through something, so to not try to understand another is a major sin. Some could also argue some level of divine intervention on both suffering a horrible misfortune close to the same day, but drawn together anyway.

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Here are some interesting footnotes to fill in some of the specific time frames in the relationship: most couples are considered serious around 2 months of dating; some couples go exclusive in as little as five to six dates, but are generally considered serious at 10; a rough accounting of how the story evolved their relationship took about 36 weeks. So when do you end it with her confessing her love, he already accepted her fully into his life by his actions so it should have been easy for him to confess it reciprocally. A minor Improvement would have been to rephrase the sentence where Finn had to check and see if he still had room inside his heart, because his actions demonstrated he already let her in completely so it should have been some kind of a happy realization that hey not only did I survive but I have another different but lovely woman in my life!

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Now just one question: you say a thousand words is a round number.. but is it truly round? I mean is it written in a circle? I thought it was written from left to right on a straight line. Just messing with you! Joking aside, this piece easily deserves a 5 and thanks for the incredibly mature human touch.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Short & sweet. That was a great series. Hope to read more from you.

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