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All Comments on 'Love Always Wins Pt. 05 Ch. 19-25'

by VetusNoctua

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Geez

What the fuck is up with all the over the top dialog? Could we just get a story without all the ridiculous speaching....gawd. Or in your words...the verbosity is extremely distractifying!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Geez 2

Forget the idiot! Some, if not most, of us enjoy reading a good story; not just for a jerk off. Good dialog makes for a good story. While a good plot is essential it is the descriptive language and dialog that truly makes a story good! Your characters are interesting and well developed. Keep up the good work!

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