All Comments on 'Love and Drama Pt. 01'

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bayouxbayouxabout 7 years ago
Good Background Building

This is a basis for much more than a quick little transsexual story. Going through GRS/SRS with Daphne can't be quick or easy. Building the relationship with Alex (or having it fail) with the established conditions, will need a little fleshing out. I feel a can't wait for the next chapter, magazine serial type story developing. Where is that link to click for my phone to buzz when the next chapter is posted?

MelanieShamanMelanieShamanabout 7 years agoAuthor
thanks

TRUST me there is a LOT more coming. Now that this first part has been accepted I can submit the next, much longer part. I am trans, so i understand how much one goes through leading to grs.

JessicaSJessicaSabout 7 years ago
Intrigued

Well I'm intrigued. There's a lot of opportunity for conflict and tension (sexual and otherwise), the basis of every good story IMO. So I think this is a good start. Hoping to see more from you in the future.

MelanieShamanMelanieShamanabout 7 years agoAuthor
thanks

Thanks... there is a great deal planned. Much of it already written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
thank you

thank you so much for submitting this story , i can't wait to read more after reading this lovely begining i am also trans , i am only at the start my transition .this story means a lot to me .this has the beginings to be an amazing story. i wish you much love xoxo. sorry not a member yet i'll have to be soon!!

MelanieShamanMelanieShamanabout 7 years agoAuthor
thank you

It'll hopefully be a rollercoaster ride.

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Just a new writer, trying to express myself. Parts 1 and 2 of sisters have been rewritten and collected in part 1... parts 3 and 4 will be collected into part 2 soon. My blog http://beautiful-tragedy.flynnos.org/

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