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by Odalisque75

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chytownchytownabout 3 years ago

***Thanks for the read.

DarkChocolate9DarkChocolate9about 3 years ago

When you connect with someone on a deep, personal level, you discover an unknown part of you. If your lucky, the person responsible for touching your soul, is similarly affected. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Beautiful story, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very good but now left hanging. Surely you must develop this story into some kind of conclusion

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