All Comments on 'Love Dies'

The Great SaddleTramp scores again, with another Great Tale. Thank You Sir for the Great Story, and the Great Writing, and the Great Effort on your part. You have once again created a wonderful Masterpiece. It is so wonderful to read a story where the Good Guy wins, and the Bad Guy pays the price. Where the Cheating Wife really suffers for all the pain that she has caused the loyal spouse. Thank You kind Sir for a real adventure, as the Hubby being tossed into the pool still tied up would be automatic death by drowning for most folks. But Not for our hero, Praise The Lord. Mr. ST I always look forward to your Stories as some of the Very Best on Lit. Thank you for your Effort. 10 stars for your effort. BTW I love your "Justice" stories as well. Thank You #Buster2U

The usual Martian Slut Ray plot. A loyal loving faithful wife for years, then Shazam!, she's some wanker's slut. She was fucking Ben for his big cock, but what made her want big cock in the first place, was she raised in a convent? Right, she was married to the rich guy, so she already had half of everything, so what did she gain by bringing Ben into the issue? She's not only a monster, but really really stupid too. The technical/legal take down was fine and adequate, but it would be nice to understand why a woman can turn so bad so suddenly. Or was she always an empty soulless monster, and Mr. Cuck just wasn't paying attention? That means he got what he married, so he got what he deserved. All's well that ends well. Thanks for the effort.

Ok story but not up to your usual.

As usual, a 5 star performance. I had been anxiously awaiting your reappearance on this site. Hopeful to see many more works forthcoming.

G

Good alternative story. I look at your work akin to a combination knock out in boxing. Always a positive experience.

Nice to see something from you without ghosts for a change.

is the loving friends or loving fucks? or maybe loving fathers?

oh lovingf is a person ok lol

trying to turn a wack-off fetish story into a serious emotional story is just weird

ah lol ok u turned it into a comedy is see lol u forgot the boss that went through the same thing but at least u had the PI friend that went through it

Really ,another poorly done story line.on in your world would this go on. To unbelievable to really happen. Yuck.

An ok story but not up to your usual standards. I'm no critic so I have no suggestions. Some of your other stories are much better.

Excellent story!!!!

Just a small confussion with names in two parts of the story, but really enjoyable all of it!!! Well done! 5 stars!

Bad editing got names mixed up multiple times for that 3*

Fun read. Thank you.

Ed

Great story pity you messed with the names

It would have rated two stars if at least you hadn't mixed up the names regularly. As it is, one star. This story is way below your usual quality. I trust that your next one will be a 4 or 5 star.

I have enjoyed your update and improved version very much. Thanks for your writing.

I really liked it better than the original two parts by that author. Seemed more "fleshed out" with more detail added. Or maybe it was just the style it was written in. Thank You for sharing it with us.

To short.

The saddletramp treatment was just what this story needed to turn it into a *5. Very well done ST.

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Despite the the name "mishaps" a fantastic 5 star story.

YOU ALWAYS TELL A GREAT TALE AND I THANK YOU...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Thank you, ST !! 5* for reviving this quite original plot, which sadly was told like a stack of notes in the original ....

Glad to have you back!!!

Great story!

Thank you for picking up the outline and making it a story.

Be well!

Not bad as a rework. I do wish you had kept the names straight.

Fun fact you may not have known...

Quebequois Françias is not the same as La Françias. It is close, being a dilect, but someone from Quebec going to France has to be careful with thier language to be understood by the natives.

The old "Tramp Treatment" for cheaters... I approve whole heartedly. 5*

I didn't read the original. After reading this, I doubt I want to! I'm sure it won't be better in any way. I'm just disappointed knowing that the PI had the cameras, etc. in the house but when the attempted murder was taking place, HE HAD TO BE CALLED!! Knowing the situation, I'd think that he'd keep an eye on the house & def. Stu. 4 stars for this always well written story. Bob

I usually enjoy saddletramp1956's stories but this one was simply too pat, written by rote according to ST's formula for BTB of a cheating wife, though it is competently written for what it is. To say that I'm disappointed is too mild a statement.

I'm looking forward to more of your original work.

MLJ

Niki just moved from Montreal??????

Fun to read.

Ed

Mix up names throughout really takes the edge off the story. Too much convenience in the details….

Great ending.

What was the point in all that security and cameras he set up? He pulled into his garage and went into the house and they were all there. I think ST is forgetting what he writes.

Another great story. On to the next one.

"Niki had just moved here from Montreal." Pay attention at the back of the class, ST! Calling characters by wrong names is careless and detracts from the story.

And another one

Another kick ass story. The name switch wasn't that big of a deal. It was easy to tell who it should have been. Shit happens. Thank you.

@Cumminginsiderher

RE: That was a pretty good story.... about screwing a "big dick".... I have one and when some women found out how big...

pat yourself on the back much

@sbrooks nit-picks not really, more like something to with cheese.

How did they enter his house after he changed the locks and installed security in and outside??? Was there no alarm??

Otherwise good 5*

Excellent! 2nd reading 08\18\2023. Thanks Saddle Tramp! 5 BIG ONE again.

So so

He was threatened and saw all the cars and didn't check cameras and video.

How many stupid pills did he take.

House was not alarmed?

I loved it, even with the name screw ups. You're not the first to do it, as some of the other greats on this site do it every now and then. I like how you introduced Marie Gagnon's ex-husband into the story, as he gets killed by a one eyed Texas Sheriff in one of your other stories. ;-)

As for the break in, he must have had the alarm system turned off for all of those people to enter his house, since Ben broke a window to get in. At least the security cameras were doing their job, and caught him breaking in, along with everything else that happened that afternoon.

Thank You for sharing your version of this story. The lovers needed a good dose of the Saddle Tramp treatment.

Should have let them get bail and allow for the accidents to happen. It is "really" terrible that the house they were meeting in burned to the ground while they were gathered in the basement. Guess their vows were until Death do us part really did mean that in their debauchery group.

This was a great story and far superior to the original story. I love to see how ST brings life to a poorly written original story. You are a gifted writer, ST. Five stars for your efforts. Loved it.

one small error, when the dad introduces marie, at one point he calls her niki "Dad explained that Niki had just moved here from Montreal, an"

Awesome story, as always...

This has got to be the stupidest story on LW, it's truly awful. 1* and that's being generous.

One of the better stories on LW , it's good fun .

I'm giving 5 stars , but that's not generous enough .