by hisangelbeauty
that is about the best writen story i have ever read on here
this just keeps getting better. this was the hottest part yet.
Thank you all for the comments Rope and I are both enjoying writing this story. To the Anon that left the feedback for me , Thank you and Happy Birthday.
This account of a virgin seduction with a slant on BDSM is flawlessly written with vast description and saturated with emotion slowly evolving gently as a baby duck down a lazy creek. The author exhibits sheer genius to extract the sweet nectar of the nervous account of an inexperienced infatuated lovelorn virgin about to transform her innocence. The author has great patience in handling this without rushing pass any of the glorious moments of Joy's awkward compliance into a new world. The story is configured in perfect synergy like that of a priceless work of art that one can see thousands of times and notice something different on each occasion. I can't extend my appreciation anymore than to say my sincerest THANK YOU! The true measure of an author's skill is when you become so ensconced emotionally that you can't bear to see the story conclude without great anticipation. Well, if you don't continue this story I'm going to bust!