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The man chuckled.
"Your new body will feel different for a while so you'll need to practice a little. We're here to help you do that."
A month later, Jesse Downs had walked out of the room in the Nippo-Seikishiba building a new woman. She still had a lot of work ahead to become accustomed to her new body, but she was happy she'd made the decision. What had promised to be a short life had become a life that would be long and hopefully filled with happiness. Before she left, she was notified she'd been hired as the project manager for the new corporate headquarters. Nippo-Seikishiba needed her close in order to monitor her progress.
Yes, she'd tell Brian about what she was, but only when he was ready to hear. That might be twenty years or it might be forty, but at some time he'd realize their lives were growing to a close. She'd tell him her story then and hope he'd chose to travel the same path she had.
If he did, they'd do so together. As the man had explained, her body was just as fragile as any other real body and would age at the same rate. Together, she and Brian would change bodies and be together for another fifty years or more. If he didn't want to do that, she'd let things take their natural course. As Brian had once said, caring for another person enough to stay with them no matter what was what love was all about.
- COMMENTS
Richard19403 months agoI envy you your imagination. Great work, thank you.
Peapod41 another fail, a couple of surplus "b"s floating about. You thinking of becoming an apiarist?
Peapod413 months agoi have looked into the future and it is now.bbThere is a prescience in your fiction that beggars belief.. loved this story. human as android. Android as human. A beautifully cracted confection
of a most febrile mind. Thanks from this reader, at least.
egb3rt7 months agoPleasant story but I suspect "cyborg" rather than "android" would be a more accurate term to describe them.
Anonymous9 months agoAs it seems is always true with Ronde:
Clever plot with a twist.
Loveable characters with depth
And for Romance, and this ultimately is Romance, quite the pull on the readers emotions.
The Hoary Cleric
naughtyandy4u10 months agoWell that was different from what I would consider to be your normal stories. I hold the same view as Brian. I would not want to even live in that artificial world. From your description it sounds like narcissistic A types are the ones who relish this kind of "living". It is controversially relevant though as we rush towards all this AI bs and digital lives. We have seen the personal interaction losing out to self serve checkouts, people with their heads up their phone, phrase used intentionally.
Maybe this serves as a wake up call to those with their heads in the cloud :)
inka222210 months agoAgreed with last comment. Written very well, but I didn't like this at all. She is a hypocrit and a liar. She IS an android, aside from "oh please make my android body not perfect" idiotic request. And starting "love" and "marriage" with hiding that fact FOR WHOLE LIFE, deliberately, is basically betraying him. His entire life and marriage will be a lie.
Cracker27010 months agoOne of the marks of a great writer is the ability to piss the reader off. What I just read was a very well put together story. But I did not like the story line
Anonymous10 months agoYour range in writing amazing. From police noir to sci-fi. Do consider continuing with the Julay series.
Anonymous10 months agoNot quite the ending I was expecting.
I was expecting her to be artificial, but that the lesson would be him realising the problem wasn’t the artificial body but the shallow meaningless relationships; when what he actually wanted was love and a real connection, which he could get with the right person regardless of what body type they had.
Having both characters keep their irrational hatred of the Android bodies all the way to the end was an interesting choice.
