All Comments on 'Love in the Eye of the Storm'

A vivid ‘back-and-forth’ in a story that retains the reader’s interest through snappy sentences and an attention-grabbing plot. Well done. Nellskitchen

Very enjoyable for a "family" story. Liked the back and forth between characters. Sequel would be nice.

A new Dg story is always something to look forward to, and this is no exception. What a clever premise to base a story around. Is there a chapter 2 lurking somewhere in the depths of your imagination? I do hope so. 5 stars for this chapter anyway.

Good story. The structure worked well and the changes of point of view were clear. The two characters were painted really well - so different, so incompatible (on the surface), but so good together in the end. Really well done. Thank you

PS Not too sure I believe in the happy ever after ending given the business he is in

Absolutely awesome Dgfl! Loved the story & the dialogue btwn the 2 MC’s. Don’t let this one go; too good & deserves a future chapter of Jam & Wren’s life together. Hell you could make a series out of this. Again outstanding work! 5* wish i could give more.

If you have an interest in mob related stories this is a must read.

The accolades could take pages, but this is not the the or place.

My only complaint - too much sex. ;)

This one wasn't for me. Maybe another time. I won't score it as I quit early.