All Comments on 'Love in Waimea Canyon'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
How to turn a reader off!

Third line - "... have gotten pleasure seeing your smile ..."

NOPE, certainly not MY smile, therefore it is not worth reading so much as one more word!

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