All Comments on 'Love is a Four Letter Word'

Rushed.

Good bones. But needed at least another full page to develop. I hadn't quite bought in emotionally yet

Two plus pages of build up then a crash bam boom barely two paragraph end. Cost you two **

Like anonymous said, you need to fill in some more of this, its oddly rushed, in a jarring way that impedes enjoyment.

Axelotto

My apologies. Not one of my best. Oh well. Better next time. Who is the show even a monkey occasionally falls out of a tree sometimes, thanks for feedback.

But love also drags you through difficult times! Alex and Abby obviously care for each other. I would like another chapter, perhaps one that includes details. Todd was described as some sort of sex machine and body builder,. I know Alex isn't the overly muscular type, but is there some area where Alex outpaces Todd? Maybe Alex has a sexy coating of hair for his delicious chest? It is obvious he treats Abby very well.

I’m rewriting the ending with believable angst

Did you get bored with your own story? All that buildup for a piss poor rushed ending?

It was going fine until it was suddenly over.

Where’s part 2 :((((

Duuuhh.