by 1writer
Finally a story told without haste, written by someone that has the gift of a writer. Well done. Thank you.
Hope you can further this as they start their Life together.
Thoroughly enjoyable - Well Done You !!
You could write about their further hardships and them overcoming it all. I'd love to read about them further.
A lovely straightforward style of writing, and a convincing account of human emotions and motivation, reminiscent of Steinbeck.
A very good character build and the slow seduction of the reader into the tryst that was written perfectly.
I'll be watching for more from this author.
A very sweet love story well executed. Appreciate you taking your time to build the story and the tension up between then. Nicely done!
I hardly ever leave comments, but I want to for this story. I too like the slow pace and build up of the story, but you have also achieved something very difficult. You have written a story both tender and sexy. It is not hard to imagine this tender and sensuous relationship will last a lifetime.
it appeared to me as if i am watching some old classic films...
or perhaps a 50s era in modern times... lovely...
This is an excellent story of hot motherfucking by a gifted author. Young Eli is smart, as well as strong, a very fit specimen of healthy young manhood. He has never bothered with twats his own age, because there's only one twat he lusts for, the one up between his own mother's legs. He's hard around his mom, and of course mom notices and her motherly cunt tingles! Mothers love to see their virile manly boy hard in his pants---that hard on is a sign her son's all grown up, ready, willing, and VERY able to do his mommy lots of good with his big stiff prick. Mothers realize that their boy's got a pair of hot young balls that never quit. Their boy's balls just keep on producing that warm creamy semen that's sooo soothing when he spurts up his mother's mommy-cunt. A joy for every mom, and for every son his dearest dream come true---oh, man! unloading his balls up his own fucking birth canal! Any wonder the world's filling up with grinning young motherfuckers and their smiling contented son-fucked moms?
I want to rave about the honest emotions the longing and love and sense of mutual support to the lovers you depict in this story!
This is one of the most honest, tender, and beautiful mutually consensual incestuous love stories I have ever read!