All Comments on 'Love Knows No Color Pt. 11'

by bwwm4me

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Buxombeauty2Buxombeauty2over 7 years ago
PLEASE END THE SUSPENSE....

GOOD THINGS COME TO THOSE WHO WAIT. AND SHAVONDA HAS BEEN WAITING TOO LONG TO BE A MOMMY. SHE GOT A GOOD MAN NOW LETS GIVE HER OTHER HEART'S DESIRE...BABY OR 2 FROM HER LOINS.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great....no....AWESOME Chapter

Just perfect. I can't wait for the next installment....OH BABY!

bwwm4mebwwm4meover 7 years agoAuthor
Author's Notes.

The baby question will be answered in part 12, which has just been submitted for approval. I am hoping it will take less than the 5 days it took for this part to be approved.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsover 7 years ago
good

A few proofreading slips, but an A minus is still an A. (five stars)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Another good chapter. The sex scenes are a bit too long for me so I just skip through them now.

I knew Von was going to eventually faint I thought it would've happened sooner.

I appreciate Von telling Jason that the wedding day is not just for her but a special day for both of them. It kind of irritates me too when the groom is often pushed to the side and most if not all of the focus is placed on the bride.

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