All Comments on 'Love Mother, Love Daughter'

Wonderful!

Suggest you get a editor to catch typos and grammar errors.

Looking forward to the next story.

Terrific story! Thank you, Rg, great job!

One of the best stories I've read

The endings excellent.

Really nice , you are a very good writer *5*s again from me!

That is a wonderful story. Well thought out, excellent plot, great ending. 5 stars from me

Great story, thank you.

Hope they lead a wes wonderful life together

The story plot was very good. Interesting. But the pacing was mechanical and the descriptions were non-existent. Sure, quite a few grammar and spelling errors. But not much depth to feelings and descriptions.

With the other 3. You never introduced Leahy. When Liam was in the tub thinking back on when he and Maeve shared a bath you said Leahy was in there with him. I'm amazed that an experienced writers you had such a brain fart. Nothing horrible. Very good story as usual.

3 stars

DragonRider55

I'm not usually into father daughter incest stories but this one is a really good one.

A very warm loving story, genuine about love. You give Leahy a great description -- down to body hair and breast size. How about a description for Liam -- chest hair for him (after all, he is a mature man!), and big cock., and cock bush. Leahy should have something to caress and taste on his chest, and have his chest hair caress her breasts. Good story overall!

I love your story and hope you write more chapter's of this ........ Father & Daughter sex is the f**king hottest sex ........... I gave it 5 star's cause I simply love it from start to finish I was rock hard ..........

A heart warming story about the love between a father and his daughter.

Excellent story, well told. It’s always preferable to read something by an author with a good command of the language and an active imagination. Thank you for this; I would have lied more, but, like chocolate cake, it’s sensible to stop when you’ve reached the end. Well worth all five stars, more if they were available.

a great story and well written but the ending was sad in a way, i do hope you do a conclusion so we have a definitive sour one, other than that ending it was a five star story

AS SOMEONR COMMENTED ELSEWHERE:

Very hot and sensuous

I love the fact that you didn't spend time providing exact dimensions and spent more of the story describing the senses. Too many writers provide exact penis size, weight of the woman, etc. and if some of those numbers are not what I like, I just stop reading cold. Keep writing as I really want to read more.

Interesting.

"Her sex was covered by a mass of dark hair." I loved it. There is no need to get rid of a woman's pubic hair. It's natural and beautiful.

I have noticed a pattern in your stories where you rush the end and just leave it.

A Hot and Sensous love story, love it.

Their relationship wasn't a surprise. But the ending was! I loved it. You do this kind of story better than most. A good tale with good characters and a happy ending. Thanks.