by HiddenDevil_
This story was a little long in parts but extremely well written! Very talented!
If it's possible, then please please continue the story of Ashley and Mark!
I've got to say, never has a story gotten me so hot in just the detail of the anticipation.
At the end of each 'chapter' i couldnt help but release myself to it. By the end of the entire 6 pages over the course of a few days, I released 4 times. Unbelievable
Well written.
great story, but isn't it more about the reluctance than the age difference? I'm glad i found it in spite of the placement.
nice story, mark could have fucked both together, look forward to that
Talk about cumming! That last scene on her mother's bed and the thumping! WOW!
That was amazing - I haven't come so hard in ages! thank you!
Enjoyed it so much. Enough background and suspense to keep the reader going and wanting more. Enjoyed the ending too with Mark leaving Ashley's mother. More realistic to me than him staying and having them both. And the very last scene had me going so much. The imagery was perfect. Nicely done!
That was a fabulous story that you wrote about Ashley seducing her mother's finance a/boyfriend Mark. I love how she did in the laundry room and then in the bedroom with the dress. I love how you described the way the Mark took her in the bedroom after trying and the wedding dress. I think he should have stayed with her mother and had fun with both of them after the wedding. I don't think he had the guts to really be able to take care of two women at the same time. That would have been a challenge for him by taking care of both Ashley and her mother at the same time.
The old saying is two hens in the hen house and one rooster--a big fight in the hen house--OVER THE ROOSTER
And I liked Marks' character as well. While he shouldn't have cheated on his fiancee, at least he broke it off with her before they got married. Of course, he should have kept fucking Ashley, maybe knock he bitch ass up.
Great read... what a seductive little minx... Well told tale. Look forward to more