by rozweb
Got to love this one! Just totally erotic and so full of electricity that you can feel the heat cumin from the monitor!
.. for that's what this story is about, and so well written too. The artistry of words paints a picture so clearly that the reader is swept away with them. Congratulations rozwebb, you're a talented writer.
fantasticaly exciting story, gives us all an insight into how your mind works... cant wait for the next chapter
I knew you had passion in your soul and now it really shows thru your writing. Wonderful and sensuous....I hope you continue to write, this is great quality.
fantastic first effort roz-i enjoyed this and have to admit related to it more than a little! more please
Swept me up and carried me away - very well written!!
Swept me up and carried me away - very well written!!