All Comments on 'Love Overcomes All Ch. 02'

you did it right by keeping the sex --- and especially the genital descriptions --- short, sweet, and romantic. that way, the obstacles in life that they have encountered and will continue to encounter make life more fulfilling, richer, and meaningful

some of your need to focus, as you did here, on the romance, the deep and long-lasting cherishing two people have for one another, and let others do those cheap "stroke" stories where you see/read little but just penises and vaginas, many times together; most of such stories are like watching cheap porn DVD's: 5 seconds after you've seen them, even if dozens, and they are gone from memory.

but the stories about special love that two people have for one another, especially with formidable obstacles,,, those are the ones we remember and cherish, if well written

Went straight to the sex far too quickly. I'm not into wham-bam-thankyou-ma'm sort of stuff. OK, so this relationship endures, but the story needed to develop far more before the sex happened...

I loved reading both parts of this story. It is great. Too bad you are no longer writing stories.

way too short and usless why bother poating a piece of crap like this it barely meets the minimum required by the site.