All Comments on 'Love Patrol Pt. 03'

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dnsontndnsontnover 1 year ago

John has come a long way from blowing that nasty neighbor!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So, this is the John and Dylan from "The Run". For some reason that makes this ***** story even HOTTER. MLF

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This chapter seemed to stall the other chapters - Love Patrol 2 and Done Deal. It seems that neither John nor Dylan is too interested in a real relationship with feelings. Dylan and Ray didn’t talk about sex with John beforehand and Ray only reacted to it on the spot in the heat of the moment. That seemed like disrespect of Ray by Dylan (typical for Dylan’s personality). I don’t see Ray having the loving relationship he craves with Dylan - hot sexy sure, but not more.

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