by LilaBlossom
...is always amazing! Excellent story! I wish you luck in the contest!
that there's only five stars to give you. You deserve at least 10 (ten). This story was wanderful, well written and absolutely HOT! I really hope you win the contest. LOVED IT!!!
I could see it coming from the beginning but it was so nicely done getting to the ending... and I do love happy endings!
Bravo!!!
That was a great story. Your a wonderful writer and I would know I read virociously and your as good as any published author I've ever read.
Conner is a lucky man! Jenny is a dream woman! :)
This story was amazingly good. I really loved it and it was so well written. The story premise was so perfect someone should make a movie from this!
This reminded me of John Collier ' s "The Chaser," but way hotter and cleverer. Hot twist.