All Comments on 'Love sweet T.'

Well written! You paint, "Word Pictures," that are delightful and highly descriptive.

Great erotic seduction

That would have gotten 5 stars but for the excessive use of commas. I take this to be a trait of UK writers. That and the descriptives.

Still an excellent story

Lee

That was an awesome erotic fic. I love how slow and patient the build up was, and how you chose the *exact* perfect moment for the sexual tension to finally break. The visual descriptions were lovely, especially of Tracy, and the natural, flowing chemistry between her and David made the sex scenes all the better. I also loved all the little bits of British slang and daily life added in, it was fun and gave the story a great sense of place. And I'm glad that the ending leaves open the posibility of more erotic fun between the two of them. Really, the only even slightly negative thing I can think to say is that the spelling was a little off in some parts, but a through run-through with spell check will take care of that in the future. You've definitely got talent, and I hope you write more in the future, because I *definitely* want to read it ;)

Perfect!

A good story line and well written. If, as one reader noted, there were too many commas it didn't bother me a bit.

The sometimes formal use of language seemed appropriate to their developing relationship... until she released into dirty language as he fucked her. Which also made sense, as she had clearly endured years of sexual frustration. Good writing.

*****Sexy storytelling with real sex. Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.