by Charlotte35f
It's nice to see some imagination in these stories.
As an author I understand the difficulty of getting a new twist but Charlotte did just great.
don1028
Hot hot hot
It got me more than hard
please carry on the good writing
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Great story good plot, liked it alot.. But you could have done alot more with the sex.. Could have been alot more detail.. But great writing, maybe a part two????
I think you knew exactly waht you were looking for. More adventures please.
The build up is good.....just needs more detail and to go on further.
Loved the story...I think it suggests rather than says all the details which lets you imagine them...always hotter!
SarahMinx
I've just discovered Charlotte's stories and I am smitten. Creative, literate, and wonderfully hot. It's great to find stories of substance here. This one may be my favorite.
Very Sexcitingly Hot ! !
I Know I'm 5yrs Late In Discovering Charlotte's
Writing. But I'm Quickly Be"CUM"ing A Very "Hot"
Fan.
Kisses,
Kathy F
Charlotte has a way of drawing a girl into her story that really gets to me. I'll continue to feed on her words pending future developments.
Wonderfully written. Great character development and depth. Scintillating story of neighborly love.
The possibilities from this story will forever be on my mind whenever I make a lasagna going forward. Yummy!
I love all Charlotte's stories, what a sensual woman she must be. seems petty being critical, but I only compare each story to her standards not to those of inferior writers. This wasn't as hot as the others O have read, but boy I still got very wet.
Loved it!! I read the story an hour ago and I’ve been laying back imagining myself as you, being seduced by Meg and Andi. So turned on now. Thank you.
little story, Charlotte's way of keeping us wet till next time. Nellskitchen
Oh to be your neighbor:) Letting you borrow a dish just so you could bring it back and find me playing, then drawing you to me..delicious!...your sweet Peach
i shouldnt have read this after the encounted i just had, now i am really worked up. this was lovely
Mmmmmm this was so delicious Charlotte. I can’t stop thinking about this encounter!