All Comments on 'Love Thy Neighbor'

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Don1028Don1028about 18 years ago
A Great Twist On a Very Old Plot

It's nice to see some imagination in these stories.

As an author I understand the difficulty of getting a new twist but Charlotte did just great.

don1028

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
lucky neighbour

Hot hot hot

It got me more than hard

please carry on the good writing

xxxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Too short but oh so sweet!

Great story good plot, liked it alot.. But you could have done alot more with the sex.. Could have been alot more detail.. But great writing, maybe a part two????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Lasagne?

I think you knew exactly waht you were looking for. More adventures please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
More more more

The build up is good.....just needs more detail and to go on further.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very nice

Loved the story...I think it suggests rather than says all the details which lets you imagine them...always hotter!

SarahMinx

BarelyJustBarelyJustabout 14 years ago
A New Fan

I've just discovered Charlotte's stories and I am smitten. Creative, literate, and wonderfully hot. It's great to find stories of substance here. This one may be my favorite.

KathyFKathyFover 13 years ago
Love Thy Neighbor

Very Sexcitingly Hot ! !

I Know I'm 5yrs Late In Discovering Charlotte's

Writing. But I'm Quickly Be"CUM"ing A Very "Hot"

Fan.

Kisses,

Kathy F

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
VERY HOT!!!

NICELY DONE

spectaculara4fspectaculara4fover 9 years ago
Lara looks for her lasagna pan and finds much more than she'd anticipated

Charlotte has a way of drawing a girl into her story that really gets to me. I'll continue to feed on her words pending future developments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
using her noodle

Lasagna pan-ties is what reading this gave me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Mmmm. Lasagna and pussy. Can't go wrong with that combo.

taylor_annetaylor_annealmost 7 years ago
lasagna

mmmmmm i can almost taste it

samanthawasamanthawaover 6 years ago

Wonderfully written. Great character development and depth. Scintillating story of neighborly love.

Patticakes2Patticakes2over 6 years ago
Mmmmm, Lasagna

The possibilities from this story will forever be on my mind whenever I make a lasagna going forward. Yummy!

sweetybumsweetybumover 6 years ago

Definite 5-star! <3

Hayley18Hayley18over 6 years ago
Not the Best from Charlotte but still Hot

I love all Charlotte's stories, what a sensual woman she must be. seems petty being critical, but I only compare each story to her standards not to those of inferior writers. This wasn't as hot as the others O have read, but boy I still got very wet.

ShhhSecretTimeShhhSecretTimealmost 5 years ago
My Imagination is Running Wild

Loved it!! I read the story an hour ago and I’ve been laying back imagining myself as you, being seduced by Meg and Andi. So turned on now. Thank you.

NellskitchenNellskitchenalmost 5 years ago
Such a hot...

little story, Charlotte's way of keeping us wet till next time. Nellskitchen

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
neighbors

Oh to be your neighbor:) Letting you borrow a dish just so you could bring it back and find me playing, then drawing you to me..delicious!...your sweet Peach

Anna16Anna16about 3 years ago

Short but erotic, so believable not like some stories

Only_connectOnly_connectover 2 years ago

Short and sweet and hot!

schrodingersmelodyschrodingersmelodyover 1 year ago

i shouldnt have read this after the encounted i just had, now i am really worked up. this was lovely

MarriedMonica56MarriedMonica56about 1 month ago

Mmmmmm this was so delicious Charlotte. I can’t stop thinking about this encounter!

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