by Otazel
I just love your stories Otazel - they are well-written, slow burning and very very hot and I'm puzzled by the rather bland negative comments - why bother commenting if you can't say why you feel something about a story. I will always be a fan.
You are a joy to read. Thank you for this gorgeously rendered story. Sexy, sweet, arousing, gentle, caring & loving. I can ask for no more. Thank you.
I have enjoyed reading this and hope you can find a thread to weave this into a tapestry of women sharing time away from husbands and children. It's never just the sex and conversation alone would be too little. Some days simply being held, and other days being nearly raped provide balance in life.
I love the voyeuristic element in the story, and you detail the characters well. I really loved the nude sunbathing scene.
Great job.
Just wonderful.
Will read that again with a glass of wine and drift into a delicious fantasy land. :-)
Cynthia.
I loved this story and the way it was written, a fantastic read.
I read it before, a year or so ago, but just found it again, and it still holds up! Thanks for sharing it with us!