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Click hereI moved on to the Analise Love's Anal series and it was obvious that some of the joy had gone out of it for her. It was repetitive and painful but she still tried to be the captivating elfin faced girl from the earlier shoots. However, she didn't fool me as she wasn't THAT good an actress as she was pushed and pulled into position by a number of much larger (in all physical attributes) men who took her body to the limit.
It sickened me but what came next was even worse.
The first clip with Zoltan made me want to throw up. The light was completely gone from her eyes. She was treated like a rag doll and all the while I could see the buzz that he was getting from it.
She was a shell of the elfin faced girl.
I went over to the sleeping Luka and bent and kissed her forehead and promised her I would sort this.
Unfortunately there are some sad fuckers out there who get off on seeing girls suffer and others who like to make them suffer. Zoltan seemed to be in the latter category.
That's ok because I kill people like him for a living.
I went back to my outgoing email account and left another draft message.
As an American i have no idea who the BNP or UKIP are but it's fiction guys. So what if the author wants a pop at someone.
The first comment was correct.
How about an author saying the republicans were all nazi's or the Dems were all communists.
Maybe some do not mind blatant politicising in stories but does it really need to be said in a literotica story.
The fact that the author would claim a Marine officer would think that is ludicrous as all of them are smart enough to know the political landscape of Britain.
There are different types of fiction and this story was not set long ago in a galaxy far far away or in a fantasy world.
Apart from that it is a good story so far and a shame the author felt the need to include such fiction
It's an interesting story. Read for the entertainment and don't take it so seriously.
@ Anon 05/14/17
Try to keep from getting all bent over something a fictional character is thinking.
Porn, fiction... not a sociology schoolbook. BNP? UKIP? EDL? No one cares.
You are not only wrong, but libellous saying that the BNP "rebranded as UKIP".
Membership of the BNP/EDL/Britain First, (amongst other extreme groups), is an absolute bar to a person being allowed to be a UKIP member and are grounds for immediate expulsion with no appeal allowed.
UKIP members are not shaven headed thugs, but ordinary decent people, who have worked selflessly to gain the U.K. a democratic referendum on our country's membership of the European Union.
We won the Leave vote We succeeded.