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- Love Unexpected Ch. 01
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All Comments on 'Love Unexpected Ch. 01'
by RomancebyFaye
- 21 Comments
kristalynmournabout 13 years agoUtterly enchanting! Paul is absolutely hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing. He's reactions are the perfect embodiment of "Love makes fools of us all". I had such a good time reading this story and can't wait for the next installment.
nomoretears00about 13 years agoLoved it! Paul is absolutely the funniest thing ever!! I thought what you did with the ear rings was neat, too. This was great and I'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter. LOL, I'm hooked :)
amber1312about 13 years agolike NMT00 said the earring idea is a neat one. loving the story and cant wait for the next chapter.
Chrissiabout 13 years agoPlease let it simmer! This one is starting off well.
seeker71about 13 years agoYou have written an engaging story, Paul is delightful and refreshing. I can't wait to see their romance progress. I will be on the lookout for the next chapter.
Peace and joy,
Shell
alexandra36about 13 years agoconsidering it's your first submission.
It made me smile and laughed. :) I like how you're building up the characters...very nice details. Loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Cheers!! :)
Faeezahabout 13 years agoYou can tell by my excessive use of O's in love how great this story is to me. Lolololol. Continue please!
feelinromanticabout 13 years ago...i cant wait for whats still to come. Brilliant start, thanks for sharing :)
Jezebell875about 13 years agoI am loving the characters and can't wait to see how they develop. This is a great first start. Keep up the great work!
AzanianHeatabout 13 years agoI don't know how long you plan on making this story, but I'd love to see Paul and Derek pitted up against an obstacle or two.
Guess I'm just a sucker for the 'conquers all' kinda love. I definitely think you've created the perfect characters for it.
And Paul's first crush story was too sweet :)
Can't wait for more,
AH
LillithArchivistabout 13 years agoDefinitely a cute story.
Like some of the others who commented, for your first submission this is pretty dang good, lol. I hope you continue with these characters, and update soon! ;)
Looking forward to your next submission,
Lily
Anonymousabout 13 years agoHe's so cute and adorable. i love how he just comes right out and says he's in love with the guy to everyone...ahh, i love it. Anyways, can't wait for more :)
Anonymousover 12 years agoLove where this story is heading, even though I did have to google "Monroe Piercing" Duh.....Big Red Truck.....lol!! Off to read the rest of their love story.
