All Comments on 'Love Wins Against All Odds'

Beautiful. I loved it. Especially the opening scene where you painted the picture of the room. A nice one.

You spend the whole story telling about the past, in present tense, then never tell us anything about the actual family conflicts and resolution!

Fails completely to live up to its title. Marked down to 2 stars as it is incomplete with no indication there is more to come unless FTDS picks it up.

Great tittle for story but the was all . Start over and do a couple of chapter .

We want conflict then resolution.

I gave it a 5 on the assumption that this is the first of several installments. If it is, I look forward to them as this was a very erotic start. But if it isn't the first installment of a series, I agree with others that it's very frustrating that it ends where it does.

Since this was submitted in accordance with the contest rules, I had to improvise and try to leave it with an ending that can be added to in future. The character Alisha does however say, that no matter what happens, she will never give Shane up and, if forced to, would choose him over her family. There is however, two more parts to this story, which I plan on submitting at the beginning of next month, so I guess that's my spoiler alert... ;)