All Comments on 'Lovely Dove 01'

Good start, what a sneaky man! Lets hope she just doesn't get a saw and cut the damn thing off as that would rather spoil fun! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Very descriptive writing. Roll on 2

Looking forward to the next chapter. *grins* Very excellent start.

Made me wet on the bus home. Can't wait to read more

Hello readers :) Part two has been submitted and is pending approval. I'll comment again when it's been approved.

I'll be interested to read part two

I really liked this a lot. Not.usually a n/c fan, but this is really.... Wow.

Looking forward to the next part!

I am liking this, and I want to read more soon.

A quality piece worth the read and especially impressive as your first submission.

Keep your standard high.

I look forward to the rest of the series

Awesome keep it coming

Creative, readable and the potential to get very hot. Nice start