All Comments on 'Lovely Linda'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wonderfu start!

Please bring us Chapter 2 soon. Five from me.

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 7 years ago
Brief, but still an enjoyable read.

Our firsts stick with us, whether it's first kiss, first time at first or second base, first oral, etc., and TS did a decent job of capturing that sense of wonder and incredulousness. (But if you continue, please don't post such short chapters.)

sexymeupsexymeupover 7 years ago
yes, you always remember 1st time

This is true, I lost my virginity at a young age, so I can't really post it on this site cause all people involved in sex is suppose to be 18 years old.You couldn't call it sexual abuse because I really enjoyed it, and was willing.

tendernsweet2tendernsweet2over 7 years ago
I am ....

If you would have made it three times as long I would have five-d it but since it was really short and to the point I only four-ed it.!* Looking for a few pages next time as you can almost make a book out of this one.!^^ LOL

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 4 years ago
Nice

Short bur hot! A little too short actually, could use some build up.

But I am definitely off to chapter 2

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Back after a few years. Some new short stuff posted recently, working on a couple longer stories. Will publish as I finish them.

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