by saddletramp1956
Now that’s a yarn with some twists!! Captivating as all your stories, grabs your imagination and won’t let go. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Great start!! You know it's going to be a great day when ST posts a new story.
Looks like a great ST series start with lots of twists and surprises! Looking forward to what follows.
Cheers
SAGE
Man, I love your stories. Glad you keep publishing here for all of us to enjoy. Definitely, you're a gifted storyteller. One of the best in this site. Anxiously waiting for Part 02. Thanks for the story.
all buckled in and ready for another great trip through ST’s unuverse
steppinontoes
I guess you may have caught a Scandinavian TV series...? It was a cracking series and this is shaping up to be a cracking story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you for sharing
Its been a while, but well worth waiting for in my opinion. Brilliant start.
So happy ST (no pun intended) to see you “back in the saddle” again! Great start 5*. Thanks for bringing sheriff Ryan Caldwell back!
Wow! The setup in this was is about as good as it gets! ST sure can write!
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So far, you’ve weaved a really interesting mystery, albeit with some rather gruesome details. Really looking forward to the next installment(s).
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5 *****
It looks like these guys are the killers and now they are set to take out Dan holder. Some how hee kills them and is running for his life.he should have turned himself in to police. No he is the prime suspect.
What is with the moron Anons that know absolutely nothing about writing? I'd bet it's the same Anon leaving multiple bad comments! Fuck you Anon, your comment means NADA! Thanks SaddleTramp, loving the story so far! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!
Great start. Now the waiting game for the rest of the story. That is possible the only thing that I don't like about stories like this, is the wait.
Calm the fuck down, RandDog25. I see your bio is all caps, do you know how to talk quietly?
As for the story, another one that hooks me and has me waiting for the next chapter!
Your one of the few writers who give us a good storyline , how many more chapters to this story.
definitely a good one but I hate serials and cliff hangers. I grew up in the forty's and 50s when it was only a quarter for the movies and you got a double feature, a cartoon, a news reel and a serial that was always a cliff hanger, ahhh, the good old days.
Weird but good . Let's not take weeks to post the next part. As we ALL know that when a writer who does that is a shitbag writer . Have it all ready to go at once
Five stars as always for all your stories, thank you. That said, it's a really eerie feeling, reading your story, dealing with CSI and hazmat personnel, while watching on TV an episode of CSI NY, and while all Greek TV channels have interrupted regular programming to show for days the aftermath of the huge railway accident with over 50 dead, and the investigators using DNA to identify victims literally crushed to a pulp or burnt to a crisp.
An excellent story. I didn’t anticipate the involvement of the two Frenchman. Nice twist!! 5 stars.
I saw on ST's Twitter account that part 2 has already been submitted. I can't wait...
Saddle trump, you’ve still got it! I really look forward to the rest of the story. Write fast:-D
Great story, look forward to the rest in due course.
Thank you ST 1956.
Scores 5/5
Well. It's the same reviews as just about every other single story that ST delivers. 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
1 star - that is all you will ever get from me, for this kind of story.
I am ex-military and I've seen too much stuff like this for real.
I cannot stand to read anything like this gruesome crap.
PLEASE add tags like murder, body parts, etc., so that I can filter this shit out of my story searches.
In fact, I am putting your stories into my 'writer reject' file.
Have a nice day
Oh boy !
Here comes another SaddleTramp/Pat Ryan classic tale of love, hate, revenge, mystery, and justice !
Not sure how long it's gonna go, and I really don't care, because I KNOW that it's gonna be good !!
5 stars, of course !
Your works are what attracted me to this site and I appreciate your sharing with us. Thanks, an old curmudgeon
What’s their for the husband to be sorry for?!? She got what she deserved! Frankly, if a man finds his wife in bed with another man, he should be able to record torturing them to death, have it become the highest rated video on social media, and receive a medal from the mayor! If you don’t want to be faithful, then don’t marry!
ZK
Always love your stories. Great to see you continuing to write and give us more of the Ryan Caldwell mysteries. Looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks 5 stars
It's really hard to care about stupid and weak people. It's also difficult to believe that civilians get killed by professionals when it's not collateral damage and there's no upside to it.