All Comments on 'Lover's Bridge Pt. 01'

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Bronco56Bronco56about 1 year ago

A good mystery so far. A helluva of cliff hanger for sure.

5stars

DrtywrdsmithDrtywrdsmithabout 1 year ago

Now that’s a yarn with some twists!! Captivating as all your stories, grabs your imagination and won’t let go. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 year ago

Another exciting story!

5

Codsrus1Codsrus1about 1 year ago

Love this so far. Good to see you posting on here again

musicman1261musicman1261about 1 year ago

Another great story. Great to see you back!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Never met a good Frenchman

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

so it stars again the addiction for these stories

great let them come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Bad on so many levels. Dialogue, plot, writting skills or lack of

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Half a page of story spaced out with irrelevant minutiae of dialogue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great start!! You know it's going to be a great day when ST posts a new story.

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 1 year ago

Looks like a great ST series start with lots of twists and surprises! Looking forward to what follows.

Cheers

SAGE

Rolando1225Rolando1225about 1 year ago

Man, I love your stories. Glad you keep publishing here for all of us to enjoy. Definitely, you're a gifted storyteller. One of the best in this site. Anxiously waiting for Part 02. Thanks for the story.

mattenwmattenwabout 1 year ago

Now I'm eagerly awaiting the sequel. Good start!

IbeSteveIbeSteveabout 1 year ago

Looking forward to the next part.

RichardbeardRichardbeardabout 1 year ago

Absolutely awesome! Thank you for these stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

all buckled in and ready for another great trip through ST’s unuverse

steppinontoes

des911des911about 1 year ago

I guess you may have caught a Scandinavian TV series...? It was a cracking series and this is shaping up to be a cracking story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you for sharing

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

How many chapters and is the next chapter already submitted? 5/5

Turning502019Turning502019about 1 year ago

Great start. Love the Ryan Caldwell character

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Its been a while, but well worth waiting for in my opinion. Brilliant start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

No wonder you have a great fan base. Five stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So happy ST (no pun intended) to see you “back in the saddle” again! Great start 5*. Thanks for bringing sheriff Ryan Caldwell back!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow! The setup in this was is about as good as it gets! ST sure can write!

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So far, you’ve weaved a really interesting mystery, albeit with some rather gruesome details. Really looking forward to the next installment(s).

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5 *****

mature_neophytemature_neophyteabout 1 year ago

And he's back!! Lookoing forward to the rest of the tale!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent. Reads like a novel.

rebolzrebolzabout 1 year ago

I've been waiting for another Sheriff Ryan story. Thx.

JohnD46JohnD46about 1 year ago

Glad to have you back. Looks like another good one. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It looks like these guys are the killers and now they are set to take out Dan holder. Some how hee kills them and is running for his life.he should have turned himself in to police. No he is the prime suspect.

RanDog025RanDog025about 1 year ago

What is with the moron Anons that know absolutely nothing about writing? I'd bet it's the same Anon leaving multiple bad comments! Fuck you Anon, your comment means NADA! Thanks SaddleTramp, loving the story so far! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

26thNC26thNCabout 1 year ago

That went in a direction that I wasn’t expecting. Hooked again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

gripping,bring on next piece

greenday0418greenday0418about 1 year ago

I'm hooked. Awesome start.

JustOneMansOpinionJustOneMansOpinionabout 1 year ago

Great start. Now the waiting game for the rest of the story. That is possible the only thing that I don't like about stories like this, is the wait.

ImNotanAnonImNotanAnonabout 1 year ago

Calm the fuck down, RandDog25. I see your bio is all caps, do you know how to talk quietly?

As for the story, another one that hooks me and has me waiting for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Your one of the few writers who give us a good storyline , how many more chapters to this story.

dgfergiedgfergieabout 1 year ago

definitely a good one but I hate serials and cliff hangers. I grew up in the forty's and 50s when it was only a quarter for the movies and you got a double feature, a cartoon, a news reel and a serial that was always a cliff hanger, ahhh, the good old days.

Burner70Burner70about 1 year ago

Weird but good . Let's not take weeks to post the next part. As we ALL know that when a writer who does that is a shitbag writer . Have it all ready to go at once

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Five stars as always for all your stories, thank you. That said, it's a really eerie feeling, reading your story, dealing with CSI and hazmat personnel, while watching on TV an episode of CSI NY, and while all Greek TV channels have interrupted regular programming to show for days the aftermath of the huge railway accident with over 50 dead, and the investigators using DNA to identify victims literally crushed to a pulp or burnt to a crisp.

SplitGeode66SplitGeode66about 1 year ago

An excellent story. I didn’t anticipate the involvement of the two Frenchman. Nice twist!! 5 stars.

pepepilotpepepilotabout 1 year ago

Damn. Now I'm onboard for another ride with ST! YEEEHAWWW

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I saw on ST's Twitter account that part 2 has already been submitted. I can't wait...

SaltporkdocSaltporkdocabout 1 year ago

Saddle trump, you’ve still got it! I really look forward to the rest of the story. Write fast:-D

WargamerWargamerabout 1 year ago

Great story, look forward to the rest in due course.

Thank you ST 1956.

Scores 5/5

Cito22Cito22about 1 year ago

Well. It's the same reviews as just about every other single story that ST delivers. 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Engaging and well-written, as always. Looking forward to more.

Ed

nixroxnixroxabout 1 year ago

1 star - that is all you will ever get from me, for this kind of story.

I am ex-military and I've seen too much stuff like this for real.

I cannot stand to read anything like this gruesome crap.

PLEASE add tags like murder, body parts, etc., so that I can filter this shit out of my story searches.

In fact, I am putting your stories into my 'writer reject' file.

Have a nice day

EastCoaster1EastCoaster1about 1 year ago

Oh boy !

Here comes another SaddleTramp/Pat Ryan classic tale of love, hate, revenge, mystery, and justice !

Not sure how long it's gonna go, and I really don't care, because I KNOW that it's gonna be good !!

5 stars, of course !

ttt59ttt59about 1 year ago

Always enjoy your work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Your works are what attracted me to this site and I appreciate your sharing with us. Thanks, an old curmudgeon

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesabout 1 year ago

Enjoyed! Thanks for your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I'm really enjoying this one. Look forward to part 2.

maxx308maxx308about 1 year ago

Great start to what appears to be a good thriller.

Thanks 😊

chris73170chris73170about 1 year ago
great start

great start to another story

IainmoreIainmoreabout 1 year ago

5 stars not because it is hot but because once again you entertained me.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

What’s their for the husband to be sorry for?!? She got what she deserved! Frankly, if a man finds his wife in bed with another man, he should be able to record torturing them to death, have it become the highest rated video on social media, and receive a medal from the mayor! If you don’t want to be faithful, then don’t marry!

ZK

LifeisadventureLifeisadventure9 months ago

Always love your stories. Great to see you continuing to write and give us more of the Ryan Caldwell mysteries. Looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

It's really hard to care about stupid and weak people. It's also difficult to believe that civilians get killed by professionals when it's not collateral damage and there's no upside to it.

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