All Comments on 'Lovers' Oath Ch. 06'

It would be ludicrous to have a story called Lovers' Oath and kill off one of the lovers!! Loved the chapter, can't wait to see how Rayn saves the day!

Eight pages long and still a huge cliff hanger! What is it with you writers and cliff hangers. It's like you're not doing your job if your readers aren't cursing soundly by the time the last word is read. Ok, rant over. That having been said, I was very satisfied by all the development in this chapter. Can't wait to meet Rayn's brother, and does Kai maybe suspect about who Rayn is? And by the way, I double-dog dare you to kill off Kiel! That would wreck the whole story and I think you're just pulling our collective leg, by threatening to do it. All joking aside though, that really would be a horrible thing to do. Well, I eagerly await the next chapter.

However, it annoys me that you say the only way to speed up your writing is to comment and vote because I do that for every single chapter and I still have to wait for months on end for the next. You always say that it will be a short wait and it won't be as long as the last but you keep going back on your word. It's always a painful wait and while I do like the chapters when they finally arrive, it's such an aggravating wait that it's almost bittersweet. I also need to go back and reread at least two chapters to remember what's going on in the story. It's not a very nice way to treat your readers. So I guess I'll believe this "short wait" business when I see it. Loved this chapter, though.

Enjoyed the first chapters of this series, but this last one was too drawn out - no pay off for the reader or reason to invest in the main characters. History & background are great, but it seems that is all this series is about....regretfully. This story had such promise & potential!

You kill off Kiel, you had better go back and rewrite the first part of chapter one, if I remember correctly it's his location that the demons are after. This chapter was really long, I wish you would've made it two chapters instead. Having said that, I really enjoyed this chapter. It has alot of action in it. And Kiel finally admitting his bond with Ryan was the best part. I don't trust Rodgers and think he might be the mole! Anyway having just discovered your story yesterday and being all caught up today I can only say write faster!!!!!!

Kill off Kiel at your own peril. We will tell the Daemons where you live. They have special torments for capricious authors.

You have been warned.

Don't you dare kill Kiel off. They are finally going to admit they are mates. How could you even consider such a heinous action. Now hurry up and let me off this cliff I'm losing feeling in my fingertips.

Not another cliff hanger. This is mean, but in a good way.

Kill off Kiel? I don't think you can unless you rewrite the very first chapter:) Buuut....hurry up with the next chapter! Lovin it:D

You need to have Kiel save Rayn from the demons who caught her as you had in the beginning of the story. And explain who and what she really is and how she truly fits into all this. I don't wanna sound like im telling ya what to do. just lots of unanswered questions left. like who really is roger?? is he the mole??? where is flash?? do rayn and kiel truly ever "get together" those kinda things....gotta destroy gedan and the demons who killed her parents to..so many questions but such a great story so far...im so hooked....love it love it....keep it up...waiting impatiently for the next installment

Please don't be mean like that :(

Don't kill him!!!!! AHH! This is the first series. That I am going to wait for the next story to be published!!!! PLEASE DONT KILL OFF KIEL!!!!!!!

...that I read this back-to-back, because otherwise waiting for the next chapter would be awful!

Thank you, this is a great story.

I love it! A cliffhanger! And a Taunt from the author, a very successful one I might add, as it has me leaving a comment! You're writing is quite brilliant and beautifully done. I'm only sorry to see if there is only one more chapter to read before I need to wait for the next one! :(

there is no. way. you. would. kill. Kiel.

Right?/???

What a way to amp the suspense! To be killed, or not to be killed, that is the question. Haha love it :) Did I ever tell you that you're a clever writer? The way the plots are being bridged, character's POV, setting the scenes - everything. At no point in this particular chapter did I grow complacement and simply skim over to something more juicy. It held my attention for the better part of half an hour, allowing my feline an opportunity to get her paws in my coffee. Now I find myself gushing, trying to put into words every emotion and little twist this story has invoked. Now I get to dance on merrily to the next chapter ;) NB - special shout out to the Editor Gabriel for doing an awesome job with our talented Fantasticfantasies