All Comments on 'Lovers' Rules Pt. 01'

I love how you describe Dan's large cock filling those tight arse and pushimg them guts around. Ah those silky tight cunts while Dan builds confidence and experience! Great character building on Dan... I almost want him shove that large cock into any willing tight puss as if it was my cock... looking forward to part 2

I look forward to the next one. Thanks.

Really enjoyed this and am going to read the rest of the story.You are also one of the few writers who understand the correct use of the words lay, lie and laying - thank you.

This is the first chapter of a great love story; accordingly, it should be re-classfied as Romance, in which the following two chapters are correctly placed. This story has everything: great atmosphere, appealing characters, a great plot, and passionate romance. It truly is a wonderful Romance story.

So, he puts his tongue where another guy’s dick has just been? Nope, not romance. Just gross. End of story for me.

Keep it coming!