All Comments on 'Loving Brother Ch. 03'

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sandsbartelsandsbartelabout 9 years ago
Totally disagree

Please give us more

Donk65Donk65about 9 years ago
I agree with sands.

Very good addition to the series. Short and sweet.

OleRoemerOleRoemerabout 9 years ago
to anonymous re: total crap

If you don't like it don't read it! If you read it and don't like it say so politely. No need to be a jerk about it. I doubt the author held a gun to your head and forced you to read it.

OleRoemerOleRoemerabout 9 years ago
Had to come back and re-read this chapter. The story of my dream fantasy.

I wish I could find a woman like Terry. I'm into anal and a woman who loves it like Terry would be my dream come true. Will never happen. I love my wife and she gives up the bootie but isn't in love with it. Well written, exciting and well paced. Thanks for putting my dreams to words.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
MORE?

I know you like your stories short 3 bit segments, but there is potential for more, would you ever conisder doing more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Loved it!! Thanks for writing it! Looking forward to a few more chapters, specifically brother sticking his big dick in her tight lil cunny next! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Brilliant!

I love all three parts.

The setting of each scene, and the depth of description were perfect in making me feel I was there with them....a sign of good writing, to allow the reader to feel they are in the scene.

Thanks for writing this.

I'll have to read your other stories now!

Regards,

DanFS

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Shnabs

I'll await the continuation of this series. I love this story.

ErosnessErosnessover 6 years ago

Me too, please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I'm disappointed

Whit a plot so nice I'm really disappointed that you left it behind. I think you could still use this plot by adding their sisters. But we have a proverb in Persian, says: "The kings know better about their interests and benefits."

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Damn this is hot........please continue!

cindyp1976cindyp1976about 4 years ago
So hot

I want to see him really fuck his sister and them both of them double team thief sister and turn her and the mother and father into thief submissives and turn it into a family fuck affair. Then they can work on turning some of each of thief friends into thief little sex slaves. That would be so hot

get2nome61get2nome61about 1 year ago

Love it a must continue ... So many options😋😋

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Premise still good.

Rushed.

Needed a lot more preliminaries with her asshole.

Extended teasing. Tongue so she could see the difference between it doing her pussy vs. her asshole.

Three stars.

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