All Comments on 'Loving Cousins'

Story reads as if it was written by a 12 year old. Got disgusted after the first few paragraphs!

Please help me understand how it is that this story is not about rape.

Not to see if this is incest or taboo category material.

Forced myself all the way through and now wonder why I would. To comment became the only reason.

So: Immature and/or an extremely naive writer. There is little to no rational thought to the layout of the apartment building or the cousin's apartment. The anatomy classes were, apparently not attended, same for sex ed.

Best I can do is suggest the writer read a lot on literotica.com and become better acquainted with the subject.

Think your handle / Literotica name should be Stu.....

Stu Pid

Trash. Spelling was horrible, story absolute garbage, and grammar gave me a migraine within first 4 paragraphs. Stop writing and go back to the first grade.

Couldn’t get beyond the first para. How does wearing pants avoid an erection?

A rape story.