All Comments on 'Loving Eyes'

I agree, definitely sequel worthy! Not only future interactions with Nora, but also potentially with Fiona and Ximena... a return to Chicalo? taming the shrew Jayne? Any or all of these might be fun to right and definitely fun to read!

Most excellent story; perhaps a sequel watching Jim & Nora's relationship unfold?

An interesting initial set-up, but the prose becomes rather purple and the Spanish isn't always accurate

This story gets better with age!

I like your attention to detail, but I checked a couple of places online. Your memory is playing you false. Captain Hondo Ohnaka is the pirate captain's name from "Star Wars: The Clone Wars."

Well done, like your other stories.

Boyd Percy

Really a nice bit of literature,good story line and really great content. One tiny gripe (and I may be wrong but I think not) if my old,old memory hasn't failed me it is not Captain Ohnaka,but rather Captain Okana.

If I'm in error some one please let me know !!!

I have read and re-read many of your previous stories and feel sure that I will be re-reading this one in the not to distant future. I hope that you can contiue this story as I would like to see what happens with the various women he has become aware of, especially his fellow scrounger.

What a treasure! There are few enough stories on here that I enjoy reading through; fewer still where I find myself skimming the sex to read the plot! By no means a criticism of the love scenes, I simply wanted to be able to enjoy the story in its entirety before going to back to savor the steamy moments.

truly a six-star story. In fact it was three or four stories. The work is awesome, and the erotic aspect great.

I regret that I have given other stories five stars, because I cannot give this one a sixth.

This is a great story. Love to hear more. I hope you write a second .

It is not easy comparing one story to another. That being stated, this story is so distinctly superior to the usual Lit fare as to require a separate category. Sir Galahad has written an instant Lit classic!

Bravo sir!

So CalCynic

You definitely weave a skillful tale, sir. I enjoyed each and every word. I look forward to anything else you care to publish.

Brilliant.

Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful on so many levels!

This is hands down the best story I have read on this site. I look forward to any follow ups you may do with Jim!