by Ninevah54
Please, will the authors of these stories try and write with some idea of what they are writing about. I see to many authors describing women that have almost impossible measurements and dimensions for example 5'10" and 120lbs would not be thin but just skinny and also to have 34DD which fit her body perfect would not be the case as tits that large on that size frame would be so out of proportion it would not look normal or sexy....The story wasnt a bad story in fact it was a good story but descriptions like this ruin a good story just as stories with 38DDD tits on a 5'4" woman that weighs 110lbs ruin it as do men with 12" dicks that can fuck all night ruin them
The premise for the story was quite good and you write well but for me it lacked any real eroticism. The characters felt slightly robotic and shallow to me. I hope you keep writing and develop your skills, I did enjoy it.
As soon as I read ' 5'10" 120 with a 34DD bra, I quit reading and scored accordingly. If they're implants, say so!
2* and that's a stretch.
I'm sick of those stories. I don't like ANY tits above a C cup, but prefer B cup tits and A cup over D cup tits
You are one very lucky guy. My mom allowed me to spy on her when I was younger, teased me a lot, but always pushed me away when I tried to make a move on her. My wife won't share me with her sister so I'm sure she wouldn't share me with anyone else either.