All Comments on 'Loving My Best Friend's Dad Ch. 08'

Hello!!! Hopefully you all enjoyed the chapter. To keep up with the story progress you can go to my profile for updates. I will do my absolute best to get a little better and keep you all up to date with everything. I am going to start on the next chapter asap!!!

Leave comments, feedback, and rate, please. I love seeing all the support and love. :)

Hmm, I'd rather wait for a longer chapter, than get small tidbits like this, especially since you haven't started the next. It breaks the flow of a story.

I am honestly surprised that the story is only a page long and appears short. I write my stories in Microsoft word and have always seemed to make the stories 7-8 pages long. This story reached page 8, but I can see how it seems short. :-/

... can you get someone to Proof Read for you??

Great update, regardless of length and minute errors re: anonymous). I can't wait to see what happens when shit hits the fan.

That was WAY too short.

I really like how the story is going. You do a good job exploring their growing relationship, and their sexual adventures are very good reading. I love your descriptions of them -- his hairy chest and abs and cock, her breast and love snatch. Keep up this good work! They are delicious together!

I know you folks write your stories and no compensation, except for sincere compliments or complaints. No complaints from me today. Keep up the good work and can't wait until the next chapter! Good story!

Can't wait for more! I know how busy life can be, and how it cam slow down the writing process. Do small chunks when you can and you'll do fine.

I hope the next one is better...

Life is hard, keep plugging away and make sure some small grammar issues are not everywhere. Thanks for the update and diving in a bit more into their heads. They need to sit and have a convo or she needs to play by ashley's games as a college student would.

More, please

Is there more to this story??

Stayed up all night reading your series. It's so good! Thank you.

We need more chapters PLEASEEEEE!!!!!!!

I'm going to need you to post more please don't leave us hanging like this

Where's the update I need it please