All Comments on 'Lower Than the Heart'

I like this story!

LOved it!!!

:)

Liked the sheriff, he's a real trooper. And I bet Trent will be even more successful as a play writer now.

I'm not into gay romance, but this was a very human tale!

...very well written, too!

I was just talking about this very difference between men and women in desire and romance. I love the manner in which you successfully illustrated how dangerous it was to reduce something that complicated into basic paradigms.How ironic we search for reliable patterns and yet we despise them. Your ability to bring the rising action to dizzying erotic heights or, pardon the pun, a climax of such danger that the protagonist might not survive always takes my breath away.

Fascinated by that Flying Dutchman-sounding position. I'd never try it -- I'm not limber and would probably get the cramp to end all cramps -- but it sounded cool. :0) This made me think of Stephen King stories set in small towns, where there's a battle for the protagonist's soul. But the weapon used was sex, not horror. And I have to wonder: what kind of history do the sheriff and Buster have? I like that it's left to my (dirty) imagination.

I liked the story all but the part with Amos. Really done well with good flow to it.

Loved the emotional angles and the hot sex. I have always enjoyed your stories, but I have to say that I think you have raised the bar in recent months. I'm not a writer, so not sure what's changing, but I sure like it. Great job.

This is wonderful. Absolutely amazing. I'm a strait woman (just here for the contest) but you snared me. Loved the conversations and the incredible characters. You craft a compelling tale sir. Thanks for the stunning read.

That was something else. Bravo.