All Comments on 'Lucia Gets an 'A''

It was a very well written story, aside from a strong need of spell-checker. There are many spelling errors, like "flush" instead of "blush, "hey" instead of her".

Thanks for the comment. Glad you enjoyed it. I'll see about fixing those last few typos (seems like it doesn't matter how many people read it...). Due to your comment I looked up "flushed" and found that it means the same thing as "blush" but for medical reasons! Ha! I'll have to change that, too. Thanks again!

Cheers,

Jim

Typos be damned! It's the content of the story and how well it plays out in the mind of the reader that really counts. As a longtime fan of GYL and her character Lucia, I may be biased. However, I know what holds my attention and that is a good tale of fellatio and a great looking girl that truly enjoys it! Keep up the great writing about Lucia, Jim, and I will be a truly happy fan.