All Comments on 'Luck Ch. 04'

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nerd4musicnerd4musicalmost 17 years ago
Wow.

I really enjoy your entries. Keep up the great work!

lisastpaul07lisastpaul07over 16 years ago
Whoa

I really hopes he tells her on the trip, before she sees the pics somewhere else. Once again you are the MF shizit

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
DAMN DAMN!!!!!!!!!

THAT WAS SO HOT. PLEASE CONTINUE TO UPDATE THIS STORY I JUST LOVE IT. YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
OMG

I have to know more.... THis is an amazing story, please, PLEASE continue

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Come On Tell It

The truth will set you free...

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Maybe freedom is not at issue here

He needs to spill it so he can move forward WITH her.

He didn't do it right because he had tunnnel vision when he split that scene. She was an un-anticipated event. He was blind sided by Fate. Life happens when you ain't lookin'.

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

He had the perfect opp to tell her coward and she is slow

Lions86Lions86over 2 years ago

one of my biggest pet peeves is saying loose when you mean lose. loose means the nal in the wall is coming LOOSE. lose means are we going to win or LOSE? also dude should have told her who he really was before he took her virginity. dude is a coward

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