by redwitch
Nice update but I have a hard time with someone so self centered on just herself and her feelings. Yes I know no one's perfect but I guess it hard to read about true love when people only seem to love themselves more. I know they'll come around but it can become alittle difficult for readers.
Just my opinion. If Mimi was my friend I'm sure she won't be for long because I would have had to give a serious reality check. True love gives more than she's willing to give.
I absolutely LOVE your writing! I always check for it! I hope the next update is a bit sooner!!
It's filled with such good drama, but please don't keep your skill away from us so long. I really wanna know what you're goin to do with Dilemma?!
Wow, i've been waiting for this story for a LONG time. i would check like every week i think. i am sooo glad that you finally decided to put up another edition of the story. please keep it coming! and thank you thank you thankyou
Please MORE! I love your work and I really wish you had more time to write, because you are awesome!
I loved Enemy and I love this one. Please keep going, I am so curious to see how it continues. Only regret: spelling. Please, get an editor if you can. Your story telling is great but your spelling not quite so. Sorry, but I am a real stickler for that and it can easily spoil my enjoyment of a story.
Can't wait for the next update! Abby
It took you long enough jeez! I think this chapter was too short considering the time it took you to post it. I love the story, but please don't wait so long next time.
Lies are about selfishness. It takes backbone to deal with truth as painful as it is. Better to be straight on from the jump.