All Comments on 'Luck of the Irish'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loved it. Love the Ukraine flag, too. Slava Ukraini!

SignedBTWSignedBTWabout 2 years ago

Re: nitpic

I don't know, what the fuck do You think he'd do? Great job Fredo my friend, as always. *****'s Signed: BTW

SignedBTWSignedBTWabout 2 years ago

Glad To See

That all of you legal beagles are experts on English law, you all do realize Fredo is British and lives there which it so happens is where he writes his perfect stories. You will note also there was no mention of suing her employer for not enforcing their morals clause. Signed: BTW

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Thanks I needed this today.

JuanTwoNoJuanTwoNoalmost 2 years ago

Lol! The second of yours I've read, immediately after reading the first, "Gifted." I still don't know what to say about that one, so simply looked for something else from you because whatever else might be said about it, you're obviously a very good writer and crafter of stories. I chose this one because of it's brevity. And am absolutely delighted with the choice! It put me in a much better place in my mind. 5 stars for this. Simply the best 750 word challenge story I've yet read.

PierremanvisPierremanvisalmost 2 years ago

Great writing and fabulous plot. This author is good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

perfecto! Pretty sure the only way she gets in the Spanish villa is serving as the maid!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Short and so so sweet. For the price of a lottery ticket. Thanks, Fredo, great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One of the best short stories that I have read on this site.

Humor and a BTB ending.

Thank You!!!

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

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Funny as F!

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That's how to write a short story .

5 * all day long .

DK

TrambakTrambakover 1 year ago

Cute little tale. Perfect in length, content and effect.

5

Chimo1961Chimo1961over 1 year ago

This needed a wee epilogue.

Nice work

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

LMAO

Shame she's gonna get her pound of flesh from him in the divorce.

Still, 5 stars for the laugh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Quick, get the divorce papers signed and notarized before she finds out the truth!

A nice fantasy, but the sh*t would hit the fan, right soon!

BlueEyd2BlueEyd210 months ago

Probably needed an epilogue (as mentioned below), because the reality of the divorce will probably change things a bit. But other than that, great story. Thanks,

Sumnut96Sumnut969 months ago

OK...THAT'S FUNNY! 5 stars. DMW aka

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story! Probably the best “750 word story” I’ve read here yet. Thanks, Fredoberto, for a great laugh.

5 stars.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Calico75Calico758 months ago

Great story! Brilliant!

skruff101skruff1017 months ago

Yep that was good.

FluidswallowerFluidswallower7 months ago

LOL!!! A really fun read!!! Thanks!

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594196 months ago

Hilarious

🙊🙈🙉💨🚪🏃‍♀️

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Luck of the Irish? Nah, as soon as she finds out it’s a prank and she didn’t win, she’ll be back. And madder’n hell. Then he’ll really need the luck of the Irish. 😆

Very nice story, Fredo, it covers a lot with very few words. Thanks for sharing.

5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Ocker53Ocker536 months ago

Loved it, I’d love to have seen the look on her face when she realised it was all BS😁⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Opinionated1Opinionated14 months ago

one of the best short stories Ive read and hilarious! 5 stars

WillowghbyWillowghby4 months ago
Perfect

...April Fool's Joke! Whether Paddy knew of the cheating and planned the whole sequence or not, as the story says, "I got rid of a cheating wife for the price of a lottery ticket..."

I agree with the comment, "Viciously funny."

Keep 'em comin'!

pwdinblewpwdinblewabout 2 months ago

Beautiful writing. I had forgotten "Jimmy Riddell", a character from my father's clutch of euphemisms.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Excellent April Fool’s story!

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