by Fredoberto
Re: nitpic
I don't know, what the fuck do You think he'd do? Great job Fredo my friend, as always. *****'s Signed: BTW
Glad To See
That all of you legal beagles are experts on English law, you all do realize Fredo is British and lives there which it so happens is where he writes his perfect stories. You will note also there was no mention of suing her employer for not enforcing their morals clause. Signed: BTW
Lol! The second of yours I've read, immediately after reading the first, "Gifted." I still don't know what to say about that one, so simply looked for something else from you because whatever else might be said about it, you're obviously a very good writer and crafter of stories. I chose this one because of it's brevity. And am absolutely delighted with the choice! It put me in a much better place in my mind. 5 stars for this. Simply the best 750 word challenge story I've yet read.
perfecto! Pretty sure the only way she gets in the Spanish villa is serving as the maid!
Short and so so sweet. For the price of a lottery ticket. Thanks, Fredo, great story.
One of the best short stories that I have read on this site.
Humor and a BTB ending.
Thank You!!!
LMAO
Shame she's gonna get her pound of flesh from him in the divorce.
Still, 5 stars for the laugh.
Quick, get the divorce papers signed and notarized before she finds out the truth!
A nice fantasy, but the sh*t would hit the fan, right soon!
Probably needed an epilogue (as mentioned below), because the reality of the divorce will probably change things a bit. But other than that, great story. Thanks,
Great story! Probably the best “750 word story” I’ve read here yet. Thanks, Fredoberto, for a great laugh.
5 stars.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Luck of the Irish? Nah, as soon as she finds out it’s a prank and she didn’t win, she’ll be back. And madder’n hell. Then he’ll really need the luck of the Irish. 😆
Very nice story, Fredo, it covers a lot with very few words. Thanks for sharing.
5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Loved it, I’d love to have seen the look on her face when she realised it was all BS😁⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
...April Fool's Joke! Whether Paddy knew of the cheating and planned the whole sequence or not, as the story says, "I got rid of a cheating wife for the price of a lottery ticket..."
I agree with the comment, "Viciously funny."
Keep 'em comin'!
Beautiful writing. I had forgotten "Jimmy Riddell", a character from my father's clutch of euphemisms.