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Good deal!

5

Ha!! Fantastic. I, as a general rule, hate the fake lottery ticket prank but this was perfect.

OMG! Brilliant!

This was just brilliant!!!

Best 750 word story yet!!!!

Good start but needs more as it could turn in to a fun story.

Ah - she burnt herself...

Very good

Fantastic

Brilliant ha ha ha

Tremendous. TC Ireland

This may be the best 750 word story I have ever read on this site. Thank you

Superb.

5/5

And there you have it. The perfect 750 word story.

One of the best shorts I’ve read in LW genre. 5*

Short and to the point. 5 stars.

That was abso-bloody-lutely hilarious.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

😂😂😂

One of the best short ones

Now THAT was a gem! Exactly what a 750 word flash should be able to do! Bravo!

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5 *****

LOL!

WAY cute

This was cute--- even a little funny. but not realistic. In the eyes of the law that is THEIR money not hers. They're married, he would've gotten half of the winnings. Cause she won it during marriage. There was a lady that won the lottery and didn't tell her husband. She just filed for divorce and thoughts he didn't have to give her ex husband anything. Well when she went to go cash in her ticket, her ex found out, dragged her ass back into court and the judge awarded the husband all the money. Cause he considered what she did was trying to hide money from her ex. Most judges don't like when folks try to scam the other using the court system.

Fun read!

Clever! Sure, beats the clichéd car in the driveway.

Brillant methode on the first sight, but what comes afterwards?

That was great!

That is really a short story. Well done!

Nice 👍

Rarely do I enjoy the 750 word thingy but you did good. 👍

750 words and I feel good. I strange how fiction can sway our emotions!

It certainly is a new approach :)

funny

Funny and clever idea.

Now that's some good stuff there!

Exceptionally clever!

Devious, but effective! Great story! Loved it and the hearty laugh it gave me! Thanks!

LOL! That was priceless!!!!!

I usually hate 750 stories but there's always the exception, this was it. 5 stars. Great story!

Bit of a different spin. 5* for spin.

Great ending - outstanding 5* short

That was excellent... and it was only a 750 word story!

Miles better than all the tedious cuckathons I've read so far tonight.

Love it! Thanks for the laughs! He was indeed a WINNER!

OMG that was fucking awesome!!!

You sir have the makings of a junior God here, if you keep it up.

Loved it

Oh hell no! You didn’t just do that. Great story, and even greater way to flush out a cheating wife.

Great little tale. Well done and thank you. Absolute respect for the flag image too!

That was really funny…well done.

That's cute. I'd love to see the back end of this.

I enjoyed that! Delightful. It just goes to show that you can be a happy man without winning the lottery.

Very funny, thanks

That worked well! It was hilarious and the name you chose for the other man? Absolutely priceless! 5*

Loved it!

Hooked

Fucking-A-Great!!!

Wonderful story, the Irish have all the luck. Thanks for writing.

Really good story with a very clever twist. Well done!

Ha. Outstandingly good

Wonderful story! Bloody brilliant! 5/5 Stars, full house, I did enjoy ii! Good to have a laugh, for a change!

Well done, thanks!

that aftermath would have been epic

As soon as she finds out she will be right back. There was no divorce here. If Jimmy was prepared to pay her way, she would have already left. Seriously, though, that was what she was counting on all these years?

It was amusing, though, and she has outed herself.

Perfect!

*****Great Story. Thanks for sharing.

Lol nice. But would have been funny to read her breakdown and how sheepish she would be.

Lovely twist. Great short story.

Perfect. Happy St. Paddys Day.

Great flash story.

Different take on the challenge but it’s a fun one! Really nice job!

I love to see the follow up when she learns she didn’t win.

Gottcha!

5*

Best 750 ever. Me and a friend pulled this exact ruse on another friend. Left him "wow" for a day. Then he realizzed after we told him to verify the numbers. He was pissed then we took him out and paid for a great time. He was stilled pissed but with a smile on his face.

Very nice. Very nice indeed. A solid 4. Some have commented they'd like to see what happened when Isla realizes it was a hoax. I think it's better left as it is. And nice crossover between St. Patrick's and April Fool's.

QM

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐.....and?

That's bloody brilliant!

The best story of 'Money Honey'...5*

Nice.

This was a well done flash story.

And funny too.

Deserves top ratings from me.

Ohh! Great story, ended too quickly.

Most original LW story in a very long time. Congratulations

Awesome!!!!

Very good story, would like to see try to crawl back after she finds out the truth

Feakin' awesome!! A+++++.... Five stars - definitely.

Great little story! 5*

Funny and concise. Liked the idea that her lover's same was Jimmy Riddel, a name I haven't heard of for years but years ago in UK it was slang for having a piss as in "I'm just off for a Jimmy riddle"

Pretty cool story...

Just shows you never really know anyone completely...

She got exactly what she deserved...

5 🌟s

FH

Best story I’ve read in some time…..5*

Very clever. But wouldn't he be entitled to HALF of any lottery winnings in the divorce? And it's impossible to get a divorce that quickly so wouldn't she, when she finds out that she didn't win, come crawling back saying she knew it was an April Fool's Joke and that she wanted to play along with it and get the better of him with her own joke? Just to insure she got her fair share in the divorce? Funny story.

A classic short! Well done!

Extremely clever and quite easy to do actually. Also so far this is the only good story in this event

Damn good April fool’s trick!

Might have been better, if he’d let her find out from the lottery people, when she argued that she’d won. Then serve her the next day.

A very very small BTB!!!!!

Very good little story. I hate lotteries in any case, so she gets what she deserves.

LOL ^^

Well done! I wonder if it has happened in real life or something similar? 5 BIG FAT FLUFFY STARS!

LOL. Loved it. Great story, 5 stars worth, definitely. Thanks for posting.

Short and sweet. Got the result he wanted.

Nice twist,but what does he do when she comes running back.

Nice twist

5*

Tc

Loved it !!

Really gave me the chuckles. Good plot

Thanks for writing!

'Effn awesome LOL