All Comments on 'Luck of the Irish Ch. 01'

0.0 omg what a cliff hanger!! i cant wait to read what happens next please hurry :)

Can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers :D

You started so well and I usually love your stories but this has too much violence! AS a victim of former both rape and domestic abuse it really doesnt make for good story fodder

but sometimes life isnt all a bed of roses. A good story line, yes brutal at times but also truthful in so many disturbing ways.

looking forward to the next chapters and hoping they lighten the mood for poor Corey.

DAM DAM DAM U CANT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT WHEN WILL THE NEW ONE BE OUT

doesn't it? don't leave us hanging. write the 2nd chapter.

You are a great writer and I usually always enjoy your works, but this just wasn't my cup of tea. It's not that it's written poorly or anything, it's actually written quite well. I just find the subject matter displeasing, but that's just my own opinion.

I hope you update Revolution soon because that is a story that I really love and look forward to reading more of. I think I'll have to pass on this one.

This is your most gut wrenching story…………….but I know it can’t end like this …………….awaiting the next chapter with tears in my eyes…………..

Wow, I didn't think people would create more of a fuss over this than the ending to Wings of Gray :D

There will be more so don't worry, I'm not so cruel that I'll end it like this :o

However, I am working on something else (I know I know so many stories at once) but I swear, you guys are gonna shit your pants you'll be so crazy excited.

Why do you feel the need to continuously break my heart. It was amazing, just don't make us wait for the chapter to long.

I liked the storie except for the part about the rape but thats personal taste in my book but other wies good job can't waite for more

This is really really GREAT!!!!!!!! Cant wait for more update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

loved it right up until the end.......

poor corey, poor eric, idk who i feel worse for!

You left us hanging! Let us know when the next chapter comes out.

You have such a way of capturing a reader's attention with your stories...so detailed and depth of emotion. I truly get a sense of you in your stories. Can't wait for next chapter, don't make us wait too long!

Yes, it's violent and predatory, but it's a good read. Let's hope Eric arrives home soon enough to save Corey. John belongs in jail.

What a cliffhanger!!! You're killing me!

I normally like your stories but the theme master - slave - pet is just too disrespecting other beings, no matter what species and I feel sorry that you have to have to think up/write this kind of story, that probably will be liked by people with perverted minds. It was quite unlucky for me to fall for the title as it is not what I like at all.

your killing me with suspense....

I think this story went too dark, I really love the darkness in your stories, at least they are pretty realistic and have a happy ending.

But SM is not really my scene, it gives me the chills,

so i'm looking forward to your other stories!

I've got to say I like this one, along with all your work :)

Big tumbs up, just hope that bastard of a creep John get's his! Yeey you :)

Another great story and I unanimously agree I hope that a... John gets it good.. Query how did John know that Eric would be late?? He knew the message was there but Corey didn't?? Onto the next chapter

This story capture my interest instantly. Granted, I am not into BDSM scene, heck I lead a most uninteresting peaceful life and this is how I want but I really love to read stories like this. These open my eyes, and my mind. Fantasies have no boundaries. If I want ordinary, i will read my diary, I read stories from Literotica because I love fantasies. Please keep it up, you will always get my vote :)

I was holding out, trying to decide whether or not I was going to read this. I didn't want the comments or the star ratings from the other readers to influence me. Let's just say this wasn't what I expected and I'm pleasantly surprised. I actually loved the dark undertones of this chapter and the right amount of conflict/tension was used for a truly good read. Accolades must be given to your editor. Now that you've captured my attention, the real challenge is to keep it. On to the next chapter...

I'd just like to point out that the Irish have terrible luck as a nation. Have you ever heard of Murphy's law, 'Anything that can go wrong will go wrong'. And Personally anytime I put on sunglasses it rains. No offence meant or anything I just wanted to point that out.

good

I don't know, this master/slave thing doesn't work for me. Any man who needs a slave has major personality problems, and any man who needs a master has psychological issues. I find it sad, not erotic.

Can I assume there is an explanation coming as to how John knew Eric would be working late? And even more importantly, how he got into the front door that is always kept locked?

I also assume that unless John has some serious friends in seriously high places he is headed straight to jail. I mean, what with the copious amounts of DNA evidence he left at the scene of the crime.