All Comments on 'Lucky Jack Learns to Obey Ch. 06'

by Sputnik57

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Then Jack grew a spine.

He remembered where his gun was. And one by one, he killed them, smiling the entire time. Heck my ending makes about as much sense as your drivel.

Sputnik57Sputnik57about 10 years agoAuthor
Lol!

I can think how you might put that gun to better use.

Hilarious comments - keep them coming!

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