by mollyj
this is fake bdsm ... but still hot.... but dangerous for the ignorant...no one starts with the whip if actually being trained...there are way too many switches in this story, and the mother has not an ounce of submission in her...makes it very confusing....also no one being trained is whipped first and by a newbie with no experiance...where is the spanking and paddeling the belt then the cane??? would be much hotter if you made it realistic, study bdsm and you'll be awesome at this