All Comments on 'Lucy's Spare Half Hour'

God that was hot as hell. I really liked that especially as I often exchange glances and moments with unknown girls in places like that. It was a fantasy come true.

You should cary the story on from where u left it off. Make him smile at her mother...she asks who that is, make her flustered. Maybe strike up a conversation and scare/tease her.

Where is Lucy having coffee today, please?

Terrific story. Maybe could give them a little more than 5 minutes, but still hot. HOW DOES THIS NOT GET A H?

Nice context and very creative. Keep it up

Beautifully written, well built, not too long or too short. Kudos!