by GoodyGoodyTwoShoes
It's great having another amazing chapter on pure love. Ms. Goody with each new chapter you elevate your writing and raise the bar for everybody else to follow. The sex was breathe taking. Also loved the intense moment of will they make it or will they be caught your chapters are long but the payoff is worth every ounce of tine and energy spent on Luke and Amy's journey.
This is a story i could quite happilly read 300 chapters off and not get bored, you are rapidly becoming my favourite writer, can't wait for the next chapter
Your writing has my mind twisted around your little finger. Luke and Amy are getting better and hotter. They are great lovers, and even better they are brother and sister. The school episode was like sexy espionage, the time they spend in bed was true love making. Heart pumping read. GoodyGoody doesn't let her readers down.
I hope I never miss one as it comes out. I absolutely love these two, you paint the picture so well ty.
I've been checking daily for this chapter. I absolutely love this series! Can't wait for chapter 6
I love your leisurely, detailed pacing, yet I'm still hoping that L & A will decide to 'go all the way' while their friends get to watch- I keep fantasizing about how it will happen, but I know your writing will exceed my naughtiest fantasies- PLS HURRY!!
I have been checking daily> you have me hooked and I cant put it down. The love they have for each other is unbeleivable. Just cant wait for the next page. Continue to write and give us a conclusion dont leave us hanging. Its so arousing to read it makes me so hot and bothered. STEAMY!!!!!!!
Tha was one of the lovelest stories of love, i have ever read, please write more like that, so beautifly done. thank you.
mck
This story would be a dream come true for me !!!! All the times I "accidentally" dropped my robe so he could see me in bra and panties. All to no avail. Only feedback I ever got was from my father that saw me like that and commented " cover yourself up right now young lady"
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All I can do is dream and keep rewarding your glorious stories
Blushing, Allison
This has been worth the wait. This story gets better by the chapter, and the first chapter was the best, so what does that make this? Read it. In order. It's a must. Believe me, you won't be disappointed. Miss Goody Two Shoes writes another masterpiece
Rogue
I hesitate to give 5 stars, especially when there's grammatical issues (it's the english lit nerd in me), but this series is incredible. Thank you (and your editor) for putting these chapters out so quickly. Every time a new one is published I absolutely savor them.
I've noted you've given yourself a lot of material to work with for future installments, so I'm hoping it's not the end of the series, but I would understand if it were since this chapter ended beautifully. The lust they felt for each other in the first couple of chapters has settled into romantic bliss (plus the lust!). .
Please keep writing, whether it be this series or another.
This is absolutely hand's down the best story(s) I've read on here! Keep up the amazing work!
Your stories are amazing! Truly a piece of art! Keep.up the great work!
Luke and Amy have left me speechless!
Their raw, uninhibited sex and their love for each other. Two lovers destined to be together, but will their carnal desires overtake their senses and will they be "discovered" by family or friends?
Amazing!!! Blows me away each time, each story gets progressively better and better 100/10 easily one of the best if not the best series on here, keep up the fantastic work!
This series is, by far, the best series i've read on this website till date.
The love and affection they show towards each other is amazing!
I want more ! I wanna know what happens when Luke has to leave her to go back. What happens when she goes on that trip !
Please, the next chapter reqd. ASAP !
Once Amy graduates from school, please let them go off to Germany together - and please let's have her pregnant!
Thanks for an excellent series to date. Keep it up (pun intended) to the happily ever after.
I can't get enough of Luke and Amy...can't wait to read about their upcoming trip...and to find out where their love and future take them...
chapter five .was so very erotic and i am loving it so much . with me getting so horny .
reading this fantastic incedible story , you are an out standing brilliant writer with out a doubt . loving this so so much do keep them cumming please do more please more.
Your chapters just keep getting better and better. I'm looking forward to reading the following chapters. Great job, so far!
So good, so intense, although that moment when she had a flash about seeing them raise a family together, why would she instantly dismiss it as being unobtainable? Doesn't seem like the thing an intelligent person would do.
And I'm guessing the next chapter is where the story gets ruined, if it goes like how the comment at the end of chapter 3 said, with another person getting involved. Totally makes no sense given how devoted they seem to be to each other with all their praise and "you're the only one for me" etc. Oh well. I'll just mentally purge it and consider it non-existent if that's how it turns out. :) I do hate it when authors build up a great story then fuck it up by going the threesome/multiple partner route, especially in an incest story where it most certainly doesn't belong IMHO.