All Comments on 'Luke and Amy Ch. 06'

Just when I think you have reached your peak, you take it up a notch... you leave me begging for mercy and craving for more. The love fest in Ethan's bedroom. Was astounding and you had me grabbing for my inhaler. . Keep up the great work..

So glad you got them to this point- witnessed incest is so f**king hot!!!!

Don't you mean chapter sex? Well, well, well Miss Goody Goody Two Shoes! BRAVO! I wonder what chapter 7 will have in store for Luke and Amy? Only the naughty mind of M.G.G.T.S. knows!

Drew :)

A bit long, but definitely a 5! 'Wonder what can happen after this!

And you thought that she couldn’t top the last chapters? Well you were wrong. Amy is coming into her own, and she is enjoying the hold she has over men, not just her brother. This chapter brings us to a new level of eroticism, and the characters Miss Goody Two Shoes has crafted take us into a new realm of sexual arousal and climax as we witness some of the sluttiest, dirtiest, and best sexual escapades that you have ever read. Once again, a must read. And I know that this series is only going to get better, for there is much more in store for us coming from the creative genius of the author, who takes the time to craft her stories as literary works of erotic art. Five Stars for the best there is. Rogue

Another great chapter in this Luke and Amy epic. I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work. ^__^

This tale just keeps getting better and better. I have been on this site for years and I can honestly say this is one of the best stories I've ever read. The tale is Hot, the idea is fun, but most of all the characters are interesting and enjoyable. You want to spend time with them and learn about them. You want to know more about what these characters are like, and you enjoy watching them grow. Miss Goody has created not just a wonderful tale of Hot Sex but a romantic tale of love and beauty. Her ability to pull you in and leave you begging for more is unrivaled among her so called "peers". I as well as many others are waiting patiently to see what she will offer next.

I never like it when someone else joins in on the fucking. Seems like it just ruins it for me. I hope that Ethan doesn't get involved much anymore and that it just stays with Luke and Amy.

i along with annoyed hate it when incest couples spend 5ch proclaiming thier love for eachother then one wants to watch or bring in some other nonrelated person. that basically sounds like a slut or pimp thing.

One of the best multi part stories on Lit! Hoping there is much more to come, and we can see the relationship evolve even further. Very refreshing and erotic...

I'm not sure if I approve of bringing Ethan into the realtionship, but I love this epic series regardless. I can never wait for the next chapter!

arching through the air!

What nonsense - keep it real please.

I am a squirter. I have squirted over seven feet on occasion and that is just because it hit the wall. And yes, it can arch like that. It all depends on the angle. So, before you start saying things aren't possible, why don't you do a little research and start with a porn star named Cytherea, then move on from there and maybe learn a thing or two about how to give a female a g-spot orgasm. But, then again, maybe that's too much work for you and it's more fun to give a story a low rating just because you don't know the facts. But then again... the person who made that comment probably will never see mine, so I'm just talking to myself.

Have a great day to all the readers of this wonderful series. I love Luke and Amy.

Oh, and to the people who don't like Ethan, you should have seen it coming, remember chapter 3?

Thank you GoodyGoodyTwoShoes for writing such amazing works of art.

OK... lets start with the squirting complainer. Feel free to Google squirting porn... I have and I swear I had to put. A rain suit on due to the force of the squirts... (true story) OK.... we are reading an amazing incest story... its not your typical Guy girl romance and due to that there isn't the same issues that hinder that relationship ... jealousy. Is not part of the equation in there relationship. Luke and Amy both love and adore Ethan and he loves them back with that same raw emotion... but people at the end of the day this is a work of fiction... An amazing work of fiction... so enjoy it as such.... love your hard work miss Goody two shoes

very good writing

Your writing is great, Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter

Chapter 5 was the end of the story for me. It was good up to that point, but two males means one too many for my taste...

have been patiently waiting for this chapter. I hop eyou continue and they are able to go on their trip. I cant wait for all the sex-capades to happen in those chapters.

You know, I find it beyond humourous that people reading a story about a brother and sister fucking have a problem with a MMF threesome. Society has more issues with incest than group sex but a few prior posters are out. SMH...

GGTS, It was an awesome chapter once again. I read into the story that Ethan may become a surrogate Luke if big brother heads back to Europe (if he does indeed go back).

Anyway. keep on writing for yourself because in the end, that's all that matters. Most of us here are just semi-sycophants sucking at the teat of your creativity.

Cheers,

Dave

The subject matter of this series is smoking hot, but your writing style really makes these stories shine. Well done, please write more!

I can't add many superlatives to what has already been listed. I love your work, you are rockin it!

RS

ONCE AGAIN SUPER HOT/ best , keep it up

Checking every other day for this chapter. This series is the hottest thing that has ever been written. Your writing is amazing. I trust that no matter where you go with the next chapter, it will be exquisite. Can't wait!

The sex in the story, as with your previous stories was beyond amazing. but, why did Ethan have to be so involved. Amy's fantasy was to have some guy watching her have sex. not finger her and lick her and blow his load into her mouth!!! Also, if a guy doesnt mind some other guy's taste in his mouth, i'd say he's bi or even gay!!! how could Luke share Amy with Ethan? He loves her!!! A normal person wouldnt want to share anything he loves so much!!! i wouldnt share my girlfriend/wife with anyone let alone my best friend !!! Also, you gave us hints that in the next chapter you are going to make Amy have sex with Ethan. now, i'm not so sure i want to read that. For the basic reason that this is the story of Luke and Amy. Ethan's involvement to the extent of watching or even Amy grabbing his cock was fine. But beyond that, it reduces my interest. You might justify that by saying she's his at the end of the day. But that doesnt discount the fact that something that belongs to you, that you love so dearly should not be shared.

This section tore the story down for me. Why not keep them together and happy instead of making it into swingers and cuckolds?

GGTS has given us another reason to keep coming back. Luke and Amy truly love one another and are willing to share it with Ethan...and US! I love them all. If you critics will re-read you'll see that involving Ethan was Amy's choice but alway's with Luke's approval. This is their story, NOT yours. Enjoy it for the hot erotica that it is and no doubt will be as we follow these lovers through their adventures. This is the BEST series ever. A 5 hands down!

I say don't listen to the negative comments! This story is amazing! I can't wait until chapter 7!!!!

Thank you thank you thank you for another wonderful chapter.

I see there's some hate for the involvement of Ethan, and while I empathize with the sentiment I'm not distraught or even surprised.

For half a dozen chapters you've written Amy as a young woman who's incredibly talented but also still realizing her sexuality. This is is another step as she explores it with people she trusts and loves. I'm very interested to see how this turns out.

By far the best story ever. Your descriptions of the scene are astounding. The detail in every subject is incredible. Its something that I truly appreciate. It shows how intelligent you are with the vast knowledge of your surroundings. It just adds to the story in making it as realistic as can be. I cant wait for more.

Yet another part that is so fucking incredible . it as close to the real thing that you .

can get . never read a story this out standing brilliant very horny .

im loving it i want this to go on and on please keep them cumming . dont stop .

Too much sex can do that to you. But what a way to get worn out! Yet another great chapter.

You've done it again GGTS. I've really enjoyed following their adventures.

adding others proves there is no love between them because IF they REALLY loved each other they would never need or want anyone else EVER thanks for killing the story AS USUAL.

Others will probably disagree, but adding in another person ruined it for me. Playing around a bit with exhibitionism is one thing, adding a third makes it about the sex, not love. All their promises of belonging together and wanting no one else are bullshit. Now they are just two people turned on by the taboo aspect.

I'm not criticizing the writing, just saying that the story took a turn that ruined it for me and I more than likely wont finish the series.

why the person ,the story was good until they the make a real no good slut who just for her own pleasure.hate the fucking story now.

like other comments I have to agree it was a mistake to

actually include third person in the activity.

confiding is one thing but involving them could be ruining it.

Brilliant writing though, great descriptive writing that I love.

I liked the romance and all but its not love with the third wheel. Very vivid though

I love the entire story :) I disagree with the other anons

i diddnt think it could get any better but the last sex scene was hotter than all the rest!!!!!!!!!!

The sex is smoking hot. The choice to add a third person to the mix isn't, in itself, an odd choice but it isn't something one expects to see in a love/incest story, which is probably why some people had a problem with it. A few small misses in editing, but we'll give that a pass as the creative work is red hot.

i agree, this chapter is hot but it really destroys all the good things about the story. It projected amy as a whore and made it look like a swinger kind of thing which is good in some stories but not in this.... i hope you can delete this chapter it really makes everything cheap like the others stories here even though i love the first chapters before this...

at least put MMF or something in the tags so people wont even start reading this series, seriously, I'm out. second guy ruined it. Before it was barely tolerable, now you turned the loving sister into a (real) slut, great work

oh yeah, writing is decent, doesnt excuse the content

Good story, very well written but I was enjoying the romance and now it's just a story about a slut and a perv. Keep writing though, I'm sure other people enjoyed the subject matter and you definatly have skill.

my favourite part is when they come home from the kinda threesome with ethan and then begin to casually fuck in missionary. so well written, so intimate, so sexy

What was set up as a sibling relationship ended up becoming an open-swinger relationship. Not what I was expecting and sadly has ruined the story for me.

Damn just when I thought I found a good one lol you could have added an mmf tag or something adding someone else just takes so much from the story. Everything else was great.

Where is the tag warning that this is a cuckold story?

Wtf is this ?

This chapter is the best MFM scene I've ever read, and that's saying a lot! Great job!

How to turn a great sibling romance story into cuck bullshit in one easy chapter. What a shame. The first 5 chapters were great, like climbing a mountain of incestuous, romantic bliss. Then suddenly, this chapter hits, and it's like the climbers decided to just backflip off the damn mountain for no apparent reason. Shits in the face of all the sentiments and love they were expressing so far. Sharing does not belong in an incest story; it's like the golden rule. Ah, what a shame. At least she didn't fuck the guy but the damage is done and it wouldn't surprise me if it happens later. I think I'll just pretend this chapter doesn't exist or was some alternate universe timeline bullshit or whatever and see if the remaining chapters keep on track with the first 5. It would otherwise be such a waste.