All Comments on 'Luke's Flame'

As I got toward the end of this tale the word that popped into my mind was: "saccharine". So sweet as to be cloying. Nothing in life works this smoothly. Maybe it's meant to have some stumbling blocks to that we'll appreciate the positive outcomes when they arrive and not be too disappointed when they don't. So I'll continue not expecting the best and rate things like this a 3* and look for more balance in the way life treats us all.

This is another incomplete story on Lit.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. But, it is getting late for old folks in Kentucky. Five Stars.

This is a delightful tale, and although it could end right here and be complete, a chapter or two more would be perfect.

-- KK in Texas

....Story Please give us part two

excellent story!

A very nicely done romance. Interesting characters and a good storyline in a well written tale. Wonderful work Lynn.

Great story line. Everyone is basically NORMAL. Can't wait for the next installment.