All Comments on 'Lunch Date with Mum Ch. 01'

by DurtyQwerty

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hope she wants more babies ,that would be a perfect revenge on the husband for neglecting her!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
More.....

Super!!!!......The build is good, Continue the story.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lovely, now we need ch.2 and lots of love making, Bunny needs to feel her sons hard cock in her pussy like a good wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story is wonderful! Such a nice slow burn as opposed to so many of the other jump right in the sack style of stories.

I hope you write a follow up or two these are some intriguing characters and I think there is lots of room too continue this story. Well done I enjoyed it immensely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Wow

Pls part 2 ASAP

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More Please. Great build on a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

One of the better reads lately… Great job, keep it up…

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 2 years ago

I really hope there's more to come.

HDblackheartHDblackheartover 2 years ago

Wow this has me hot with anticipation you better be close to posting the next one post haste because this one ended way to soon 5 stars and when you finish this series please put it all in one story and do another one from moms perspective

DurtyQwertyDurtyQwertyover 2 years agoAuthor

wow, thanks for the comments! I submitted part 2 with it, but it was sent back for various reasons! I've submitted it again, so I hope it will pass muster soon. Thank you again.

JhobbykatJhobbykatover 2 years ago

I’m going to wait patiently for the next installment. Maybe not patiently ……

Love the buildup.

withinreasonwithinreasonover 2 years ago

Excellent story. The slow buildup makes it credible and suspends disbelief. Very entertaining. Look forward to more from you.

DurtyQwertyDurtyQwertyover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks people! I'm trying to post the 2nd part now, it was sent back due to me mentioning something about when the character was 15 and despite it clearly saying the character is in his 30s, moderators marked it as underage content! I amended and resubmitted it, but it literally takes days to get something approved!

Crusader235Crusader235over 2 years ago

Very Hot, can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It was great i would like to read the rest of the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Grate climax to the end had to keep reading, loved it thank you.

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