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All Comments on 'Lunch with Coworkers'

by NPH786

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LancerInLALancerInLAover 10 years ago
Mostly liked it

Certainly the wrong category. Ended too quick. But was enjoyable besides.

Val

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Yup, wrong category...

Sex scenes are erotic, but too much happens too fast. Take your time, the getting there is more than half the fun.

I don't understand the need for the pizza guy at all. His being there added nothing.

Keep writing. I'll read your next story.

Anonymous
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